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jacedes
2009-11-11 . chapter 1
I always enjoy a good Josef/Beth story. I like that both of them found someone to love after the tragedies of Mick and Sarah. And since he turned her successfully, they get to have each other forever :)

One little nitpick: Beth has blue eyes and Josef has brown. You have this reversed.
sj61
2009-11-05 . chapter 1
I liked this short story,Josef finaly met someone he could spend eternity with.I allways felt a bit sorry for Josef and the disaster with Sarah,so this was a very happy ending to this story. I couldn't help smiling though when I read that they had the whole Versailles burnt to the ground,one of the main tourist atractions in France,and all the vampires there ,wouldn't it be a giant police investigation and all the vampires, wouldn't it be a huge risk that Josef would be caught by someone.They came out of it realy easy!Sorry for being picky;I think you did a great job though and I'm looking forward to read more if you write something else:)
pilotlover
2009-11-05 . chapter 1
Hey, if I can't have MickBeth, JoBe is more than welcome,lol.

Great job. Thank you.
clairlz
2009-11-05 . chapter 1
Good story. Too short but very good. :)
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