This is so creative. I love the idea of him teaching her something. Very cute.

Very cute story. First Bleach fanfic, you say? It's pretty good, and although very simple it gives a nice warm vibe. Now I like shoe laces even better! 8D

Please write more. :)

Ash, this was a really good story. And since this is the only way to get in contact with you since you don't respond to my e-mails...I would like you to read "How Dare They" I think you would like it the girl I beta for is writing it.

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Cute.

That shoe lace analogy was very fitting and nicely done, I'd say.

Good job. ;]

Aw so cute! This is your first Bleach fanfic? You should write more. Good writing :) I really liked it.