This is unbelievably insightful, verbose, and descriptive. Your varying sentences and longer paragraphs of thoughts, character behavior, and descriptions are well broken-up with short, meaningful sentences. However, there's a great flow to this story that begins in the precinct, follows Olivia home, into the shower, and finally to the scene with Elliot. There's this ache to your story- your reader can really feel Olivia's pain and acceptance that her life and the people in it twist and turn her world into constant loops. This story is nuanced and very well written. :)

Oh my!

You managed to redeem Elliot in my eyes with that last scene, and Liv broke my heart again, man this lady can’t win for loosing , I hated Porter on the episode, I hate TPTB for once again messing up with her and for not giving her what she most needs, an emotional support.

I totally love the respect you show the characters in this fic. By the end while reading what Olivia is thinking I was like NO nogo that way; but then she managed to control her feelings nad El was there to catch her but never cross that line..very very good.

Ah.. something so realistic. Its so bittersweet and it something I know you can relate to. :)

wow, you are an AMAZING writer. I enjoyed this SO much! : )

I hope you write more future fics! : )

Great job :D

That was just lovely and so very Liv.