wtf
please explain??
i like what you wrote so far, but im confused about the whole dream thing and how is he even thinking of letting her belive shes still human??
cant wait for an update

really excited to read this! love your twist on the vampire traits, especially how this will affect edward/bella.

If he changed her why did he leave her in the dormroom, she will kill some-one wouldn't she? So what Edward powers are that he could hear your thoughts as well as get into your mind, how does that work?

Sounds lovely so far ;) can't wait for more :)

Great job!

I like the concept of this story and am intrigued. I'm anxious to to where you take this.

'Ey this is lookin' god chica!
Ahem. Let me rephrase.
This is really good. Update soon!

Interesting!

Interesting new twist for vampires. Liking the plot so far. Totally just saw those Bazaar photos and hotdamn that motorcycle one was my fav!

OMG, that was so freaking good!. Something new, like nothign I`ve ever read before.
Awesome work.

You don't know how much I appreciate your perfect grammar.