OMGness that was so good! The story line was interesting and didn't deviate to much from the true essence of the characters on the show. The kiss & the tear at the end was a shock though. Other than that, it was a really great read.

This was such a great story, interesting and funny. It had loads of detail but you kept everything moving along at a good pace. I really, really enjoyed it!

Great ending, Julechan! It was fun to see what the holonovel had in store :) I look forward to enjoying your next piece!

I'm bemused, and this story made me smile when I was having a bad day. I can't wait for the next chapter and how Janeway 'explains' the situation. You have really progressed as a writer Julechan, keep it up.

Fabulous! I want more!

Gah! Cliffhanger much!?! This is such an entertaining story! Love it!:)

The Story is very thrilling, please continue!

Oh this could get interesting. I love it so far. Can't wait for the next chapter

Cant wait to read more this sounds so intriguing !!

I was always disappointed they didn't let her finish the holonovel in the show, so I love how you have written it. Very suspenseful :)

I'm so excited you have a new story up! Great job so far! I can't wait to see the next chapter! I always wondered what was going on in that holonovel!