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What About Love
2009-12-04 . chapter 16
This was the perfect ending to a beautiful story. It was a good touch to leave it open, and let the reader predict the future. Looking forward to your next story, as always.
Steff
2009-12-03 . chapter 15
Oh God I haven't written a review yet!
I loved to see what her aunt's point of view was, since it had always been a mystery for everyone.
As for what happened, Will being there helped a lot in a thousand ways, well first because she needed to see him and she needed to cry, I guess she got mixed feelings when she saw him standing there.
In a way, I'm glad that things happened that way.
GeeDee
2009-12-01 . chapter 15
That was so sad. But I am glad will was there for her at the end. This story is so good, I can't wait to read the next chapter.
What About Love
2009-12-01 . chapter 15
That was so sad. What she must be feeling... so glad Will was there to hold her afterwards. I hope the next chapter will be a bit happier.
Steff
2009-11-30 . chapter 14
Yeah, so this is kind of odd. First I hate Grace enough to kill her, then I love her to death (which is ironic haha).
I don't know but I think that this sort of conversation, confrontation or whatever it was, between them, was truly necessary. Sometimes we do need someone to help us face our own feelings. It's hard and that's why it's better when you're not prepared to have this kind of deep talks. It hits you harder, because you don't have time to analyze things and try to deny them, it takes you so aback that you have no other option but to admit it. Wow it was really good.
I hope it did help her.
I loved this.
What About Love
2009-11-30 . chapter 13
That was so surprising, but so worth the wait. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Steff
2009-11-29 . chapter 13
Oh God, it was so sad! haha
And now I am officially in love with this couple.
I thought I was already but not THIS much!
Her father wrote that! Seriously, that is the saddest thing I've ever read!
And then when she opened the door to look for him and he was gone! Aw! I really won't be able to take that scene out of my mind.
Catherine, wow!
It is so sad that she is RIGHT, the emptiness in her eyes is evident.
What a good chapter.
What About Love
2009-11-25 . chapter 12
Oh, I wish he could talk back to her. It was so sad. And her views on herself, the way she knows herself, is just great. It shows a certain understanding of her life that I think is definitely necessary. Great chapter.
Steff
2009-11-24 . chapter 12
hahahah this is SO EMO!
haah Ok let me get serious, what her father did really touched me and also the fact that she feels so betrayed! I mean!! She should know that he didn't stalk her just because! He simply wanted to know more about her. But ugh, Karen!
The very last line is the saddest thing EVER! EVER !!

Good chapter,... so sad!
What About Love
2009-11-23 . chapter 11
Oh, wow! So many things happening at once! This chapter was amazing, and I can't wait to see how it all gets resolved. I hope she can continue, somehow, with Will, but it'll be even harder after all of this.
Steff
2009-11-23 . chapter 11
I AM
SHOCKED!

a LITTLE tense?!
You told me..next chapter will be a little tense.
This is amazing! haha
I felt like a witness!
I love this I guess I'm gonna be reading it over and over again until I get tired of it.
Great chapter.

It was very interesting that she confronted him in the middle of a party, it's great because she didn't save it for herself. And I would have expected her to just,,.. stop talking to him. I LOVED IT ... truly unexpected.

Also, Grace's slap was the one thing that completed all the mess.

I cannot wait until next chapter. To see how they solve things out.
What About Love
2009-11-21 . chapter 10
Uh oh. This is going to get exciting, even more than it already is. Oh, update soon. I'm dying to read what happens next.
Steff
2009-11-20 . chapter 10
Officially my favorite chapter ever!
Grace seemed like a creppy stalker...quite scary! But now I am in love with everything that this is going to cause!
I mean, haha poor Will got caught! And now Grace knows everything because she saw it by herself.
And I loved...adored, Will being compared to a drug! Wow.
I really enjoyed reading this.
Aly
2009-11-20 . chapter 10
uh oh... I love these portraits. and the end of this one was great.
Steff
2009-11-20 . chapter 9
Hah! She's right.
Well, Mason's point of view! How interesting because he's still quite young and he's getting to not so obvious conclusions. How nice.
Also! I loved when she counted until five. Sometimes it's great to have time to save the moment as a picture. I've done it before and you never forget them.
Very good chapter.
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