Simple and cute. A bit more cursing than I usually care for but it didn't ruin it for me. Over all, I liked it.

so cute, i liked the all way they had until the confession, it made the fic much more gorgeous!

i was awwing throughout the whole thing >.< so swet hahah cant stop squealing XD

I LOVE IT!
it was simple yet cute!

Oh so dash darn cute loved it

Nice. Perhaps cute ^^

Aww, that was really cute ^_^!!
I think you portrayed Watenukis emotions and thoughts very well, and Doumeki was really in character.
Nicely done^^.