Okay, so I just read this, and I loved it! It was awesome. I hope that if you do decide to turn it into a full story, that you do it soon, I will look forward to reading it.

I would defenetly read it that was one of THE BEST stories i've read. It was awsome! congrates!

Twisted. Very interesting:)

Wow. Scary. :) I enjoyed it, alot :)

Oh my god, you should hella continue this as a story!

As weird as it seems, I love this so much.

I just sort of stumbled across your fic and I love it. I love love love it. I really hope that you decide to continue it!

I really got a sense of your Edward, I felt his crazy, his coldness, his confusion. You did a great job making him slightly inhuman.

I would read it! Hope you make it a story!

Bony and Clyde murder version. Wierd but good.

Turn this into a full fledge story. I would read it. It's cool to have a different kind of Bella/Edward tale where they are both homicidal psychos with a thirst for blood. How is that for a bit of irony. Even though this isn't a vampire story, but it still ends up bloody. Awesome.

Oh my GOSH you should totally make a story out of this..!

Oh my god. This has to be one of the best stories I have ever read. Never read a story as much as I wanted continued. It is a great story! Please, please continue. Please?

Wow, I really hope you continue this story.

Although Nietzsche is a fascist bastard, I really enjoyed the parallels you drew between his philosophies and Edwards. Its not very often that I come accross a story on this site that satisfies my both sides of my brain, and even less often do I find someone who is able to use philosophy and political science in such a clever way.

I really do appriciate the effort you must have put in to this story. Thank you very much for writing this, it quite honestly made my day.

wow that was pretty descriptive lol. great story, dont read to many dark themed ones, but i liked this one, well done. i would like to see if there is more to this story..

Now that's taking turning him human very literally! lol

DARK-ward. :D You did a great job of making him ultra creeptacular. Have you been studying psych of serial killers in college? Or is it that everyone is always saying don't go home with a stranger you never know who's a serial killer? *chuckles* Whatever inspired it you did a good job of making it very natural in the vein of making him a human vampire that is strangely attracted and tamed by her and who she should be utterly appalled by, but ends up being attracted to. Nice job with his clinical detatchment and denyal of any cause for his behavior, and then he notes that he was never shown any affection as a child.

Well thought out and well written! Good job of writing a very thought provoking piece.