You're absolutely right. There is not enough LeonxLuis and that is something that has to change. You did a great job. The poem you used was lovely. Ah, if only Ashley has somehow 'accidently' met her end...but then that would have done Leon no good. But then again, Luis really shouldn't have died. Anyhow, this was nice to read.

YAY, Ashley died...uh...ehrm...I mean...no...not Ashley...anything but bug eyes...
HAHAHA
YAY Leon x Luis
That I can agree to!

Wow this was a really great story, you captured all the characters very well. I haven't read a lot of LeonxLuis during my fanfiction life, but your story opens up a new horizon for me. Hoping to read more from you soon!

Finally... Oh finally. I told you I was happy about it, now I´m even happier, because others get to read it too.

I love it, the way you write is beautiful =D I'm really curious where this is going and I can't wait to find out xD
-Fangirls like mad-
I'm starting to like Luis more and more. You have this odd talent of waking up fangirls inside of me, and I thank you for it xD

Keep the boylove coming! XD :3

(Oh that dedication? That made my week =) I'm so happy now xD -insert facebook heart icon-)