|Reviews for Tragically Beautiful, Nessarose|
| Sadie Revere 7/19/10 . chapter 2
please keep writing! i like it!
| Phases Of Obsession 6/6/10 . chapter 2
Great! You characterize Nessa so well. Nice job!
| ReallyUhSharp 6/2/10 . chapter 1
This is a nice idea; hearing things from Nessa's viewpoint. It's true that we don't really hear much from her point of view in the musical. I love the touch about her feeling guilty about her mother's death- it never occured to me that Nessa might feel it was her fault as well as Elphaba.
I think the reason not many people are reading this, however (which is a shame, because it's actually very insightful) is that we all know the musical already. I think what you're trying to do is great here, but when you're quoting the musical word for word, we all know what's going to happen next- There are no surprises. My advice would be to try venturing away from the script a little- you seem to be a good writer; but have the confidence to find your own voice!
| Maeline 6/1/10 . chapter 2
AW DON'T STOP! THERE AREN'T ENOUGH STORIES FOR NESSA, AND THE FIRST CHAPTER WAS GOOD! PLEASE! IT WOULD MAKE ME HAPPY.
| rainbowfish22 6/1/10 . chapter 2
You should continue.
| Phases Of Obsession 3/15/10 . chapter 1
I've wondered what was going through Nessa's head even MORE than Galinda's! You're doing a great job!
| AsianRose7 12/16/09 . chapter 1
I like this one Shae! Maybe you might vary your word choice a bit though. . . ;)
| Raven Firestorm 11/22/09 . chapter 1
please continue!I thought it was refreshing to have a different pov for wicked!
| ghostly bender 11/10/09 . chapter 1
| rainbowfish22 11/6/09 . chapter 1
I really like this. A lot. You need to update soon! :D.
| AshleyInWriterland 11/5/09 . chapter 1
That was really good. The descriptions in the beginning I saw fitting. However, after about halfway through I noticed you weren't describing much...next time I would add a bit more description :) but good job!