please keep writing! i like it!

Great! You characterize Nessa so well. Nice job!

This is a nice idea; hearing things from Nessa's viewpoint. It's true that we don't really hear much from her point of view in the musical. I love the touch about her feeling guilty about her mother's death- it never occured to me that Nessa might feel it was her fault as well as Elphaba.

I think the reason not many people are reading this, however (which is a shame, because it's actually very insightful) is that we all know the musical already. I think what you're trying to do is great here, but when you're quoting the musical word for word, we all know what's going to happen next- There are no surprises. My advice would be to try venturing away from the script a little- you seem to be a good writer; but have the confidence to find your own voice!

AW DON'T STOP! THERE AREN'T ENOUGH STORIES FOR NESSA, AND THE FIRST CHAPTER WAS GOOD! PLEASE! IT WOULD MAKE ME HAPPY.

You should continue.

...Yeah.

I've wondered what was going through Nessa's head even MORE than Galinda's! You're doing a great job!

I like this one Shae! Maybe you might vary your word choice a bit though. . . ;)

please continue!I thought it was refreshing to have a different pov for wicked!

Update soon?

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I really like this. A lot. You need to update soon! :D.

That was really good. The descriptions in the beginning I saw fitting. However, after about halfway through I noticed you weren't describing much...next time I would add a bit more description :) but good job!