|Reviews for All in Pieces on His Bedroom Floor|
| dyingimmortal 1/9/13 . chapter 1
Very different but amazing! Your writing is beautiful and the emotions are palpable. Great job.
| ILoveFowl 10/25/12 . chapter 1
Can you... maybe... continue this? PLEASE? PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE THIS IS MY FAVORITE OF ALL YOUR STORIES PLEEEEEEEEEEEEASE MAKE A SMUT...
| Electricboa 8/22/12 . chapter 1
Very sweet and well written, as always.
| Snakequeen-in-Norway 4/13/12 . chapter 1
| That Crazy Hippie Gurl 10/13/11 . chapter 1
That was amazing! So much expression, and depth, and even though most of it was sad and angry and bitter, it turned out happy. That's the best kind of story.
| Claw 5/24/11 . chapter 1
A bit dark, but fitting for the subject matter. Broken hearts are no picnic.
| JaMisa27 3/21/11 . chapter 1
| Victoria of Memphis 2/2/11 . chapter 1
...It certainly does bear repeating.
| ChocolateEclar 8/18/10 . chapter 1
Just... lovely. There are several lines that really jump out at me because of their beauty, but I particularly liked this part:
"'Artemis,' she said. He closed his eyes. He had done what he could. It was her turn now."
And, of course, I have to mention the "'It bears repeating'" and "'Genius boy.'" Wonderful.
| Athyna DaughterofPosiedon 6/13/10 . chapter 1
That was great. I liked that you switched between the two stories.
| Cassie 4/17/10 . chapter 1
That. Was. Amazing. :D
| wolfraven80 1/3/10 . chapter 1
I'm having trouble thinking of something to say beyond "it's lovely!"
I reminds me a little of "A Family Tradition" – the idea of the long separation and the string of girls and finally the reunion.
I particularly liked the description of Artemis in the first section; those opening paragraphs set it up beautifully. And Holly's regret is palpable throughout. I simultaneously want to hug her and shake her (not that I think she'd stand for either, mind you). The reunion is wonderfully touching and the last lines are just right.
Great one-shot! And it even ends happily! Yay!
| andaere 11/21/09 . chapter 1
Beautiful story. I live the style, and the almost poetic beauty of the writing. The vague-ness but the gradual coming together of the pieces... pun not intended. xD Anyways, moving, stunning, unique. I love it. :)
| R. Reynolds 11/6/09 . chapter 1
Well, damn! Now that was some good reading. Normally, I don't swear in reviews. Authors tend to find it offensive. But for writing of this quality, I will make an exception.
| WeirdButAwesome 11/5/09 . chapter 1
Aw. That was sweet.