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Syber Tyger
2010-01-05 . chapter 1
Wow! I am really glad you decided to post more chapters of this, because... I don't want to say I love it, because my Favorite character is trying to commit suicide... but it's fantastic none the less!

My father tried to commit suicide, and I think you have really gotten into the head and the feelings someone would have to feel to do it.

Anyway, great job, and I hope you update soon!

~Syber
Laura Harkness
2010-01-04 . chapter 7
poor sam! what a cliffhanger!
Laura Harkness
2010-01-04 . chapter 6
one of my favorite doctor who words:

"Run!"

and oddly i don't think i've ever used it in any of my stories... hm...
Laura Harkness
2010-01-04 . chapter 4
yikes:

And people the Ma’ark take an interest in usually end up missing vital parts of their anatomy

this is getting a bit spooky!
Laura Harkness
2010-01-04 . chapter 3
oh! i like sam! this is very exciting and really a fabulous story so far.

i'm looking forward to updates.
w1nter
2010-01-01 . chapter 7
I like the TV rant, too, and the fact that his pointless rambling saved his life. Remind me to do more pointless rambling if I ever get into a dangerous situation (preferably one that is so dangerous it necessitates utter silence though; that would defeat the purpose of the rambling). Anyway, nice chapter. Go Noof! :D
w1nter
2010-01-01 . chapter 6
*loud cheering deafens the Noof*
Not only did you update - twice - I is feeling loved cuz I got mentioned... aw! *does the dreaded happy happy joy joy dance... with the baby dwarf, for good measure*
In fact I liked this chapter so much I have two fave quotes: "...the Ma’ark seemed confused beyond the ability to offer any form of meaningful reply..." and ' “The window’s got glass in it!” “Door it is.” '
What, really? I thought windows with glass were extinct... anyway... loved it! :D
Time Lady 802379
2009-12-31 . chapter 7
Land is a good thing... Land is good for running... We all need to run!! Comes with the job, right? *Though which job that would be, apart from being the only Time Lord left in existance, or his companion, or an olympic runner, I don't know*
Time Lady 802379
2009-12-31 . chapter 6
"Run!" Says it all really. That's just never going to lose it's meaning in my mind, and 10 will foreveer be my favourite, and when anyone asks: "Who was YOUR Doctor?" Ye shall know the answer.
Anyway... Good chapter!
*Gose on to read the next installment*
deaths-master
2009-12-31 . chapter 7
Meh I'll revive snake in 2010

'peekaboo'

anyways musing about random thing is a usefull way to help
ur self suvive

we should right a survival guide lol

cya,

shadow

p.s. this guy just hacked open a tree with human heads inside it
deaths-master
2009-12-31 . chapter 6
omg peekaboo lol *dies of laughter*

now look wat uve done uve killed snake, btw I'm shadow, snakes other personality
and I must say that was an awsome chapter

well ttyl I have to go revive snake

cya,

Shadow
Time Lady 802379
2009-12-11 . chapter 5
Run! Love that word! Especially coming out of that mouth! *Drools* Huh? Review? Oh yeah! That's what this button does! *Slaps head* Duh!
Time Lady 802379
2009-12-11 . chapter 4
I neva bover wiv da grama, at least, not dat I no of... I like it! I suppose Sam would be very attatched to his head, I know I am to mine. I shal read on! Mwahahahahaha!
w1nter
2009-12-10 . chapter 5
And... damn. That's where it stops. Update soonly! (Soon + quickly = soonly.) That should be today's word of the day... but so should "Charcoal". With a capital C. Charcoal is a cool word! Anyway, yes - UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE! And accents! Accents! Accents! Even if you just put a mention in of how Brittany thinks the kiwilanders speak funnily... make mention of the iksints! 8D
w1nter
2009-12-10 . chapter 4
Hahahaa - too many fave quotes from this chapter!

"Never backwards though, ‘cos then you can’t see where you’re going. Nasty business that. Cliffs and everything.”

“You just seem extremely happy, even by your standards. Hyperactive even.”

“Note to self, on return to TARDIS, remember to hide the sugar. The Doctor appears to have been splurging again.”

And there's more! But I'll spare you the monotony of looking at random bits of your own stories again... yeah... and you rully should do the hool kiwi iksint thung - would be AWESOME!
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