 Warriorcat's Spirit 2009-12-17 . chapter 1I love you! This is simply fantastic! |
 Hakumei-chan 2009-12-02 . chapter 1Kingdom Hearts is a series that makes people want to cry. I should know. I also cried too.
You made cry and I feel depressed again. I beat the game a couple hours ago and that scene was friggin emotional. Listening to Xion's theme amplified the sorrowful scene.
Xion's Theme is definately the most emotional theme I've ever heard in my life...follow by the Other Promise.
*faves this* |
 xXlil'eveXx 2009-11-27 . chapter 1OMG
you made me cry! T_T
actually i'm a hardcore fan of Roxette pairing. But this game convinced me and made me become a huge fan of XionxRoxas. omg i love this pairing ALOT!
i cried at the scene where Xion "died" too T_T
i cried even more at the part where Roxas said "Who else will i have ice cream with?" T_T
i hope you can come up with a story for this pairing! :D |
 Alex Warlorn 2009-11-19 . chapter 1I just wish more fanfiction writer has the decency to let Xion stay dead. There are other ways her existence that no longer has an existence can impact the current KH's world without needing to resurrect her or advert her death.
Since she returned to Sora, her experiences are in there somewhere, along with Roxas', Sora just needs to cover them to remember his time as Xion and Roxas (remembering both sides of a chat, that would be something). |
 Lyra Nights 2009-11-16 . chapter 1(T.T) It's awesome!
Lol, I haven't even bought the game, much less played it up to 350's days... still, that scene is beautifuly tragic, and I think you captured it perfectly.
You did a great job. |
 lafayette722 2009-11-08 . chapter 1I cried when I saw this scene too. It was so sad. You did a great job on the story though! |
 Erika Strider 2009-11-07 . chapter 1I finished Days just a few hours ago, and I couldn't help but cry when Xion faded. The other times were when Axel confronted her in front of the Mansion in Twilight Town, and in the cutscenes at the very end with Roxas and Riku.
You did a great job at writing this. Especially that, "Who else will I have ice cream with?" part. I'm not used to present-tense stories, but like you said, it makes a lot more sense than past-tense. I think a lot of people probably wouldn't have realized it actually, so good catch.
I shed a few tears reading this. Listening to Xion's Theme just amplified it. And when a sad story makes you cry, you know it's done its job. Great work. |
 BrooklynHiggans63 2009-11-07 . chapter 1aw this was amazing ive just started playing this game and i was litterally crying when i saw the video on youtube i was ahem tryin to cheat heh theres one thing i didnt get did roxas die too?? |
 UnVeRsEd 2009-11-07 . chapter 1YOU, my fried, have a talent for this.
I have to admit, i had to force the tears back when i first watched that cutscene, because i was on a train back home and i didn't want strangers to see me cry over a videogame. i i had to be satisfied with sniffles.
I cried at the end of reading this too, and it doesn't help to have "The Other Promise" playing in the background, either...
you say you needed practice, but i say, kudos to you! not much makes me cry, and this DID. you did a splendid job at writing out the emotions of the characters as they happened, and you also did an AMAZING job at writing in first person.
i'm also glad to see someone else who actually UNDERSTOOD what roxas meant when he said "Who else will i have ice cream with?" most people i know have watched it just go "wtf" and i have to explain it...
UGH, such a sad game... and such a sad story. great job. |
 NinjaSheik 2009-11-05 . chapter 1AWESOME ONCE AGAIN!
Poor Roxas... |
 XxSakura-HimexX 2009-11-05 . chapter 1Oh man, I could not stop crying once this scene came. It was just so sad! And I liked Xion too! And I cried while reading this too. Don't worry, I think you did an awesome job! |
 Inspiration of Imagination 2009-11-05 . chapter 1Damn. That's really really REALLY good. |
 Catalyna Cullen 2009-11-05 . chapter 1omg u too?! i cried like a baby when i watched this scene the 1st time, and i start to tear up every time i watch it! but hey, it's a really sad scene, so it's bound to pull at the heartstrings;it made me think how much it would hurt to have to lose one of my friends...
but i digress. i really liked it! |