"Do not be afraid, Zoey." she said "The tracker Mercury has marked you as a vampyre. Do not be afraid of Mercury..."

*Raises eyebrow.*

i love this story

absolutely love this story!

Hey!

I've been wanting to read somthing like this since I started reading House of Night. *-*/puppy eyes/

Thanks for writing this! D I'll be looking around for the sequel - wait, is it still Edward/Bella? I don't think I can read Edward/anyone that not Bella. xD

Congrats on thed story! See ya!

Purple L.

hey again,

me and my brother apologize for our druken review. Or lack or review.

So we'll make it up to you. Since we couldn't use our other one, we borrowed our cousins one. She's reading this story as we speak.

Heres a real, head on review with the ugly, the sweet, and not the crap we think is in-the-moment-funny.

First of, this story was very original, we never read the House of Night stories, but we could still keep up. Which is good, because sometimes people put knowledge and quotes from books that confuse or irritate people.

The writing was good, as well as the grammar. We didn't check if you had a beta or not, but assuming you don't, it was good.

A lot of people put 'OMG!' and other IM languages and it really ruins a good story.

Its late a night now, so we need to make this quick and have a few hours of sleep before school.

My brother says Twilight is gay, and for sissys, but in this story, he didnt complain. Mostly because he enoyed edward suffer, and jacob wasnt mentioned too much. This probably doesnt mean much to you, but if you knew him, this would be a compliment.

Some parts were a bit unclear though, but only because they were flashbacks. Maybe you should use italics? doesn't matter, your story.

Anyways, we're sorry we offended you with our lack of review. Hopefully you can forgive us, but to our defense, it was and still is late at night. And we thought it was funny, without thinking about the author's feelings. Since the email could be considered as spam.

Oh, one more thing, we like Bella this way. Less over-forgiving, and clumsy and all that. Made her into a real woman, that doesnt cling too much to Edward.

You can reach us through the account that you blocked , lol.

Have fun writing and rejecting us.

"I'll come"

double meaning

*wiggles eyebrows*

haha sorry, couldnt help myself.

I LOVE THIS STORY SO FAR IT IS ONE OF MY FAVORITES!

PLEASE UPDATE SOON I WANNA READ MORE!

I love it, I think that this story is very cute, keep it up.

LOve it

I LOVE THIS STORY SO FAR IT IS ONE OF MY FAVORITES!

PLEASE UPDATE SOON I WANNA READ MORE!

I LOVE THIS STORY SO FAR IT IS ONE OF MY FAVORITES!

PLEASE UPDATE SOON I WANNA READ MORE!