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LdyGossamer
2009-11-06 . chapter 1
I liked this story very much! I can see JD designing those bots and feeling it wouldn't be something he could share with him team. You should write a sequel where the team goes to a compition in Vegas and supports JD.
sfulton229
2009-11-05 . chapter 1
Great fic and wonderful look at the team having fun together. Movie night sounds like a blast and the teasing was so nice to read! You came up with a very clever way for the guys to find out JD's hobby and I can see them enjoying "Battlebots" so much. JD's reasons for wanting to keep his involvement quiet were very logical but the guys are very supportive and enthusiastic; looks like "Outlaw" will have a much bigger cheering section next contest. JD may have his secrets but he is still predictable. Thank you for sharing this! Lots of fun and action (even if it was just bots fighting)
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