While definitely sad, this is such an intriguing story. It touches the heart strings on several levels. I am only sorry that it is so short. I would very much like to see you take this story and turn it into a novelette at least. Flesh out the betrayal of Ron, the aftermath, the wedding and birth and maybe some of the six years of Rose. Then the death and results. And them most certainly their tracking deatheaters and similar afterwards.

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A great story. Very moving.

Interesting idea, the only way you could have expanded it would have been the struggle of the two of then about not going dark.
I liked the Ron's POV.
Ciao!

Yes, this one has me sniffing back tears. It probably would be the way the tale of Harry Potter ends had the person writing the last three HP books stuck to the original plot.

Good story, but it'd be far more readable if it wasn't entirely in bold.

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Never, EVER ** off parents, especially when they are that powerful and quick to anger.

Very poignant and sad, but ultimately somewhat triumphant in that the Potters haven't turned Dark (Grey at the most) but have used the death of their beloved daughter as a spur to make a real mark on their world (wouldn't care to wager how many other young witches have benefited from their actions).

'Tis sad about Ron, but he's at least honest about fault et al. and he does get to see them, even if they don't see him. In some ways, that may be his most painful punishment.

It was so very sad, it was wonderfully written. Post more soon
Until next time
Gloria