interesting. i like this better reading it a second time.

can you make a continuation? T_T
please!
i really loved it!
it was so beautiful!

i really loved your story! Eventhough narusaku is my favorite pairing, i just think the way you brought this across was just beautiful! you have an amazing ability to appealing to a reader's emotions. i can't see narusasu happening in the manga though. i think their bond is more brotherly than romantic.
And i liked that you didn't make Sakura a b*tch who treats Naruto badly. I hate when writers do that! She cares about him, and even aspires to be like him!
Great job and I'm definitly going to be reading more of your work!

Oh, ouch, that really hurt. But in an amazing way. You wrote their interactions really well, and aw, I feel bad for the both of them. :(

Powerful.

I don't know how else to describe it. That's the only thing the brain's coming up with. Got some teary eyes goin' on here and everything. Damnit.

Thank you so much for the amazing read, as always.

beautiful. really ... i'd say more, but my brain functions have been put on hold...

HOLY SHIT. The ending was like a punch to the gut. Damn, it was amazing. This isn't very constructive, but it was so moving I'm at a loss for words.

At the beginning, I was afraid of reading this. I know it’s stupid. It’s just that.. It’s hard for me to believe that Naruto can find happiness without Sasuke. It’s hard for me to believe that he’d set his eyes on somebody else. . After all, he seems to have an obsession over him.

I don’t know if it’s coincidence.. But you wrote Fleeting Moments and then this (I’m talking about new fics, not updated chapters) So what I’m trying to say is that, I feel your Naruto and Sasuke as far apart as in the manga.. Though I feel that what you write is real. That any other normal person would carry on with his/her life.. That not everything is about flowers and butterflies. But over all that, that fiction is not just about writing crap with the characters that you like.

Uh.. I loved “reading from another point of view”.

And I just have to say, that the last part was the best. Not because Sasuke was mentioned… It’s more like, how you wrote it.

D:

i have like a bunch of thing i wanna say... lot of things i felt when i read this...
i don't wanna relate to it and yet i do...
how do you do it? how do you manage to write so humanly, so very real-like? it feels like i'm a voyeur, like i'm intruding onto someone else's life... and yet sometimes, such as this one, and some others of your stories, you manage to speak to me... so deeply, so hurtfull...
i love your writings, is not even about it being about naruto and sasuke... is about them being so real... a part of you...
i don't know what to say... i really wanna say something to compliment this, but i feel like anything i could say would sound overused... so i won't say anything other than the fact that this is an amazing story
if you ever do decide to write a book like a novel of thge sorts, i would love to be one of the firsts to buy it

That was a satisfying to read. I loved the domestic setting and how their time-worn familiarity was so FELT in the description. I just knew, the moment Sakura stopped, what was happening...and I wanted to scream, "DAMMIT NO! IT WILL HURT NARU!"

This line "The request clung to the back of his skull..." was wonderful, visceral and telling. His cry of "grief" was so painful. It hurt me to even read it.

Thoroughly enjoyed that read. And now you ALMOST make me want to go read the manga...but not quite...*boycotts*

~aa6

Okay, I don't have time to give a proper review, I shouldn't have read this now anyways, SO, I just have to say how unexpected and awkward that seemed at first, but it ended up being beautiful with the emotions and the, I don't know, the feel of it. You never disappoint!

He seemed so happy to start with but he's beent hrough so much and it makes me sad to see him like this.

o a very poignant story once a again, sinewy and original. I assume sasuke refused him in the relationship/friendhsip sense. But this story was a very nice twist. Well written and crafted. I just don't like the idea of sakura's pubic hair. It makes me...

Heave.

Richard :]

Beautifully written, I must say. The realistic details given almost envelop the reader into the piece, making them feel they were really in that cozy cabin with them. It was just... Beautiful...

I must say, though... The end where she has his yell Sasuke's name upon his orgasm... That's just odd... I mean, sure the manga gave them a bond, but it implied that he was the first, closest thing he had to a brother. And so, now you have Naruto sharing a romantic evening in a cabin with his lover having a great night. Then while busting a nut into her, his muscles finally relaxing and being overcome with fatigue after fu*king her brains out, thinking of Sasuke, he screams Sasuke's name, whom (according to your story) shunned him and refused to go back. I think you captured them beautifully until she suggests to scream his name and how it would make them both feel better.

I frowned upon that mainly cause of one reason: It's completely random and I don't see how, with any stretch of the imagination, screaming Sasuke's name would help them them. Unless, of course, the most obvious reason being he was imagining he was fu*king Sauske. The accelerated, more aggressive fu*king, following immediately after she suggests that he say his name with his orgasm, as if she was some "random sl*t", I believe was the words you used, also points to the fact that he'd rather be having sex with Sauske. Hmm... Which, if that was the case, it goes against the brotherly bond it established between the two in early manga/anime chapters... Well, aside from the fact that it's really odd... >.< heh

Sorry if I misunderstood or skipped something, but I only read it once quickly and cringed at the end. Don't feel like double-checking... I felt like typing... haha

All-in-all, still beautiful work due to how well written it was. 5/5 in my book. btw, straight loved the beginning! :D

O_O
Good god...
T.T
That was incredibly touching. I mean, wow, really. Made me love all the characters present and alluded to, and feel like their relationship was real, not anusing of the others. I don't know if that makes any sense, but wow. One of my favorites without a doubt.