I already like this.

This is a very good story so far, however there is something i'd like to mention...ninjato, did not exist...the short swords you mention are agreed on by many historians to be a hollywood creation. There is no historical record that weapons such as these existed, and it is believed that ninja used whatever weapons were available at the time. They probably would have used a wakizashi rather than the longer and more cumbersome katana. Also i have a question...How does Banger know Snake's and Tommy's entire back story? Did Tommy just off handedly mention it one day? Many of the Joes don't know their whole history together yet one new recruit happens to know it all? May wanna explain that...also Banger seems slightly Mary Sue-ish, to be qualified on all F series jets...plus B-52's, B-2's & the SR-71 (a plane that was decommisioned in the 90's) seems rather far fetched...i am also from a military background (infantry), i like your usage of terms, however...k-rations...haven't been refered to by that name since the 80's...it's MRE's...which are not an improvement lol...other than those things, and some slight spelling and grammatical errors, this is a very good story :)

I should point out something that all Joes know and teach by example;

**Sanity is a consensually defined state**

Psychology and Sociology texts pretty well agree that three out of four people have some sort of issues. Of those, two out of three would, on scrutiny, be recommended for professional help.

That's half the population, peeps!

The reason society doesn't consist of shrinks and their patients is that most of us go on living despite our issues. That, and you can think the Great Gorgonzola Monster crteated chihuahuas as a joke or anything else as long as you don't actually disrupt the public.

Different branches of the Joe forces specialise their definitions of sanity, as do we all. And you depicted it nicely.

Thank you.

Ninja like Twilight Zone; Ain't nothing wrong with home movies!

I had to read this one again. I have to add the pairing Storm/Banger to my new faves.

My gf is like her in so many ways its scary. again Keep up the good work.

ESM

gotta agree with Banger- Queen rules, and yes, Bohemian Rhapsody is definately the greatest song ever written, small part of my feelings may be because hey jude and all other Beatles songs deppress me but also because Bohemian Rhapsody's awesomeness is too obvious not to acknowledge, this whole story rocks, love how the ninja are with making sure no one interferes with their love lives, very sweet and i also love all the information about ninja mixed in throughout this story, great job

This is getting good! I like it! I hope we see the Twins, Destro, Dr. Mindbender, and Serpentor!

You're having Mutt as a Greenie? Where's Junkyard?

This is good but once again you skipped the sex scene! Why? And you need to seperate the Author's noyes from the chapter or it is confusing.

Good chapter but what universe is this in? DIC? I ask because Stormshadow's a Joe here and he wasn't in the Sunbow seasons. And how did he become a joe?

That was very good! I just wish you would have included the actual love-making though! Anyway, Does PT stand for Private Training?

You're done? Actually done? No! ;( Now what will I have to look forward to during the week? No! You don't realize how much I love this story! If you did, you'd reconsider ending it! Your story is what really introduced me into Stormy-love! I even adore Sherry, and I hate OCs! I love the humor and pop culture in this piece! If this is the end, we better receive others. This is a warning; you better have something else to sacrifice.

-zeurin

I can't believe it's over already! Great work! This story had a little bit of everything and your talent really shows through! I look forward to reading lots more of your other stories! Thank you for sharing them with us! :)

Aw, I was really enjoying this story too! Oh well, it was really, really fun while it lasted. _ Anyway, this is an excellent story. I hope you keep up the awesome work on your other stories!

great conclusion, i really enjoyed this fic , think i used the word enjoyed or great in every review. but its true. cant wait to read more of your work and the rest of your unfinished stuff.