This story shows great promise, the first chapter alone showing great creativity and originality, while still remaining true to the content of the actual game.

This is perhaps one of the best stories I have read, and hope to see it continued, although experience teaches me not to expect another chapter of this length and quality for at least another month. (Wont stop me from checking though.) I look forward to the next wonderful installment.

The introduction of the individual characters is creative, and gives them a life that is often lacking in other stories. Also, the repercussions of Sparrows actions as a child are already being somewhat demonstrated, and I hope to see more such tangible consequences.

And last but far from least, (least shall never be mentioned, because then I'ld have to pay it,) the humor of the story feels full and genuine. This truly is a story that I have enjoyed reading.

This was the longest review I have ever written. I think I am losing feeling in my fingers. Goodbye...for now