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bhishmapitamah 1/20/12 . chapter 1
Again and again and again and again, its just one trigger after another, statements which can keep you occupied for too long, long enough. It's almost frustrating to write a review you know, "awesome work, etcetera..", how many times have you had a review that has been anything other than praise? You just have to take a print-out of these reviews with you and spread them on a publishers desk...

By now, you KNOw you are quite rad. However in judging you as an author, do readers confuse your work with characters which have already been infused life into by someone else. I mean you've won this field, conquered narutoverse, but are people (me included) right when they say you ought to be published based on that.

Something origial, from scratch, is the only plausible answer, i sincerely want to review your originals.

p.s- im sorry if what iv written above sounds crass, its just something i was saying to myself when i was overwhelmed by your words. Then i thought why not just let you know, please alert me if you have an answer to the why not.
Ioga 1/7/12 . chapter 1
This fic has a nice poetic flow, distant and aloof befitting Konan's personality. I like your take on a new pairing, and giving some more flesh to these two, who are mostly a sideshow in canon.

Random note, "he groused, when he'd first heard" - maybe the times should be synced here, "he'd groused when he'd first heard"? But English follows strange rules; I'm not a native.

Nail polish was an interesting touch of crack. X-)

Thanks for this!
RicePaper 1/3/12 . chapter 1
Wow, I love your work.

This piece has the colour white painted all over it.
honeybeeze 10/20/11 . chapter 1
Amazing little one-shot. Ive always kind of like Konan, and love how you portray her in this. So cold and unattached that Hidan feels... And your metaphors were beautiful and added amazing pictures. Like the one about her killing her enemies by 'snuffing them out like a candle,; or putting an invalid out of his misery by holding a pillowing over his face. I mean they are so dark but really great. This made these characters so three dimentional, like Hidan and his charisma. Sorry I'm rambling now, but i just wanted to show how much I loved this one-shot :)
Breezybiatch 9/24/11 . chapter 1
Ahhh. Young love. The kid kicking the girl he likes. Brings back good memories.
Ahhhh 7/22/11 . chapter 1
Loved it.
blackwingsgreeneyes 5/16/11 . chapter 1
This was the best chapter ever! O_O

I loved loved loved the way you wrote it so well! I enjoy your awesome writing skills and it was extremely intriguing to see them bob interfact.
naash 5/4/11 . chapter 1
wow you make this couple work and with such little information the naruto manga gives off too

:)
x0SilverFeathersx0 4/11/11 . chapter 1
Oh goshh this was beautiful! Honestly its so hard to find the right "chemical" for characters who have pretty much neever spoken to each other, but as always, you got it! Awesome !
midnight.wolf62 4/6/11 . chapter 1
Huh... A lot of new insights in this story. It was really interesting. It's so amazingly written, too.
Sepsis 1/19/11 . chapter 1
Great! :)
TheAlieVee 1/5/11 . chapter 1
Wow, amazing insight. Is there going to be another chapter of these drabbles? They're very beautifully written )

- Sabaku no Bri
NavysGirl 1/2/11 . chapter 1
I love your story! I wish you'd write a sequel, and I don't at the same time...But it is amazing! :D
LookAtTheBeautifulDay 11/27/10 . chapter 1
Oh Konan! Oh Hidan! lol I think these two could of had a very interesting conversation had they ever been in the same room as each other. This fic was really well written and flowed amazingly well. Konan's personality as well as Hidan's was spot on. I doun no spelling or grammer mistakes(although i wasent looking :P) It was agreat scenario with a great ending!
cy-grl 11/7/10 . chapter 1
I think I've read this like ten times already. I'm in the middle of my exams right now and reading one of your stories while smoking a cigarette is a great way to take a nice break:)
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