 dana-san 2009-12-15 . chapter 5Well - I actually stayed up reading every chapter and I loved it. Kenji is a great new character but I really do like the way you have depicted in the earlier chapters the Amazon politics and Mousse. No decision regarding if Ranma should wind up with anyone either - at least from me. Please continue! |
 Radio Driver 2009-12-15 . chapter 5Good goin, Dean. Keep on keepin on. |
 Redzorin 2009-12-15 . chapter 5Nice freakin fanfic. |
 sayalovesdiva 2009-12-15 . chapter 5Another good chapter my friend! The only problem I found was that the battle scenes were lacking. You mostly just had sound effects but no description of the action. All in all it was great. I can't wait to see what happens with ryoga. |
 Sir Thames 2009-12-14 . chapter 5Good work here, mate. Spot on. |
 wolf40k 2009-12-14 . chapter 5One thing for sure, Nabiki is a lot cheaper in giving out info in your story than I think she is usually.
I don't know how to feel about this fic. Ranma isn't Ranma personality wise, and Kenji seems like an over powered Mary Sue.
I wait to be proven wrong though and await your next chapter. |
 chm01 2009-12-14 . chapter 5 don't tel me he likes ranma too! |
 Riniko22 2009-12-14 . chapter 5Seems to be no end to how delusional Kuno can be. |
 DrTempo 2009-12-14 . chapter 5 Good as always...This Ranma seems to lose her clothes a lot..Fanservice, I bet...And Kuno wielding a ki sword? I think this is rare that KUNO gets a powerup. |
 AshK 2009-12-14 . chapter 5Excellent chapter update as always! Keep up the great work!
Sincerely,
AshK |
 Julianmon 2009-12-14 . chapter 5These really are very good. I hope you update soon. |
 luger 7 2009-12-03 . chapter 4rockin fanfic, dude. |
 Redzorin 2009-12-02 . chapter 4Nice freakin fanfic. |
 Radio Driver 2009-12-02 . chapter 4Good goin, Dean. Keep on keepin on. |
 Jazze 2009-12-02 . chapter 2 Great fight and it's unique on how Mousse is a good fighter in this story so far. Shampoo is still the same in wanting to kill the female Ranma. Instead of sending her to the Tendo dojo why not send her to Ryozonpaku's way. Talk about some killer competition for Kenichi. Just a thought. I hope you continue and sorry for the out of date review. |