 Estel A Duath 6/22/07 . chapter 1no prob harry! um you are AWARE that there is err voldemortandharry slash out there right? What say you? |
 InuyashanKagomerlovers 6/7/07 . chapter 1aww, what a good role-playing of Harry...
cool "letter"! |
 ShaeLoki 5/21/03 . chapter 1I feel that this has a good point. Lot's of people are pareing Harry, Ron and Hermione and it's just not right. I know you have read part of my storry and don't worry nobody is going to be pared with the main Charchter she is a loner. A shy loner at that so even if she did like someone at school she would never tell them. Anyway I like what you have to say and you know you are compleatly right people should do there homework befor or even while they are writeing there fan-fic. |
 heather 3/21/03 . chapter 1 now thank-u this is something some writers need to read good letter/story |
 ProfessorSinistra 8/23/02 . chapter 1Nice writing, but Harry was not born in 1991. You know why I know this? Because he was age 12 in 1992 when he goes to nearly headless Nick's 500th deathday party [he died in 1492], meaning Harry was born in the year 1980, putting him now at an estimated age 22. Just had to clear that up! |
 cough 5/24/02 . chapter 1 This might be more impressive if you knew how to spell "Hermione." Or if you knew that it wasn't "Hogwart's." This is the kind of nitpickery that you've just engaged in...and so shall I reciprocate. |
 Lady Angel 5/20/02 . chapter 1That's cute. I love it when the characters talk back. |
 maddened milch 4/30/02 . chapter 1one word, pointless |
 TaintedSlytherin 1/15/02 . chapter 1hehe. very clever idea...plus you have a point, many peeps get Harry wrong...especially in relationships (they seem to have no explaination as to why the characters are getting together) and all the Mary-sues out there *sighs* i wont start on that. |