Simply adorable. All of it. From the epic battle waged between Lee and Tenten, to Shino's encounter with the little boys, to the Aburame fangirls, every moment brought smile after smile to my face. Lovely story! ^__^

Well, first off, I thought this was hilarious. I loved seeing the lighter side of the shinobi, especially when playing with the children, and the culinary battle. It's nice to see lighthearted, silly fic that still keeps everyone in character.

However, regardless of how much I enjoyed the end, I'm kind of confused as to /why/ the kissing took place. It was written very well for what it was, but for some reason I had trouble connecting it to everything else. I didn't feel there was enough meaningful connection between Tenten and Shino earlier in the fic to justify kisses, but that was just me.

Aside from that, I really enjoyed it, and I am looking forward to perusing the rest of your stuff. :3 --Judo

This cracked me up so much, I loved reading it!

That...was one of the funniest things I have ever read, and a very good view at Shino. Bravo!

your story is hillarious! i loved Tenten and Lee's fight, it was so funny! Also, the three little boys that talked to Shino were so cute! keep writtin!

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Wow, this story made me smile! I could really imagine Lee and Tenten recreating the scene from Meet the Robinsons (I completely adore that movie!) This story really made my day, good job!

loved all the silliness of this fic. the 'epic battle', the fangirls, Neji giving a piggy-back ride, and Shino trying to tickle Tenten to death. great writing. ^ ^

Neji as a pony. What a picture. I love the little boys awe of Shino. Touching and sweet. And the fight with Lee and Tenten...Wonderful. Very funny. And Shino's fangirls...great.

That was simply *adorable* and exactly what I needed after the complete angstfest that was your latest TMG chapter ^__^ Brilliantly written, as always, and very funny :)

I loved Shino's little fanclub, they were hilarious (and rather unfortunately reminded me of myself, Snowsong and Murasaki Kaida when we get together *laughs*)