Well, this chapter looks familiar. I wonder howso ¬.¬

Anyways, the last three chaps have been good. I particularly liked Yuno and Scorpius' banter, very funny.

Well, at least the incident at the ball explained why Lily was so mad at him at the start of this scene. Either way, some good chapters, babe. I can't wait to see some more.

Dave xx

I have to say, I'm really liking the use of flashbacks in this story.

Anyways, another good chapter sweetie. I guess this answers why the two of them stopped talking for a while, eh? Well, I'm looking forward to what happens next between them. If she'll talk to him that is >.>

Keep it up!

Dave xx

Well, just got to the end of this chapter. I have to say, this is a really good fic. The way you've managed to give great personalities to characters who were given almost NO development, or even mentioned, in the canon series at all is incredible. They're really beleivable too.

Is it bad that I'm envisioning Lily and Scorpius looking very similer to Ginny and Draco? >.>

Anyways, I'm really looking forward to the next chapters. They should be great, if these are anything to go by =D

Dave x

wow...4 both 4 n 5 chaps...keep up the gud work...i really like ur story...=D..waiting to read more...

Did I ever mention how much I just love your writing? And how it's so much better when your listening to your favorite song while reading it (Three Day's Grace! Love them!)? No? Well, I am now.

Lily/Scorpius is just so much fun to write for. Even though we don't know very much about them, (they were only in the epilogue after all) we have the capability to take the characteristics of their parents - even grandparents - and possibly a bit of our own imagination and make do. The human mind is just wonderful, is it not?

Another thing. I really like how you present their relationship. It's a bit like Draco/Ginny, but still different.

wow...nycc chaps...both of them...waiting to read more..update soon..:D

nycc chap...waiting to read more...:D

Keep writing :)
One of my fav ships is Lily/Scorpius and I'm happy for your story. Can't wait for the next chapters.