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ErnestTheGuy
2009-11-21 . chapter 2
Holy crap, i love the Doctor. im 17 so i havnt really seen any of the original Doctors but i know they were awesome. with thath said,i cant believe you wrote this. its is just soo freaking epic and i love Bonnie in this one.
Hugh Fisher
2009-11-10 . chapter 2
Bonnie as a secret Dr Who fan? Shego and Kim menaced by convention nerds? This is just nuts, and great fun!
soulman3
2009-11-09 . chapter 2
Here thought I was a hardcore Doctor Who fan.But you and Bonnie put me to shame.I thought it was in the 70' when "Macra Terror" showed on Doctor Who.?

You can't blame Kim and Shego for been terrified of those fans.When obessesion fans want something, it's almost impossible to stop them.Even if Kim says she can do anything.Famous people have to be careful all the time around them.That would pretty much trauma anyone!

No surprise Shego and Kim worship Ron after saving them from been tarn apart.That must of been awkward at first with Kim's parents (Especially her dad) Kim acting like haram girl to Ron.Good thing Ron is too nice of guy to take advantage of the ladies.Even if it's fun to image.

DALEK!Bonnie and Drakken own a remote control Dalek.!!No matter how many time you say it.It's every fans dream.Wonder why Bonnie risk lossing her school food chain ranking.But nobody stuiped enough tease her about it with that thing around.

I would love to see Bonnie sister faces when she come home with it.They where probably already to tease her for having it.?Exterminat!Extermiat!EXTERMINAT!Right before they start screaming and running.

This is not part of you're Cindy and James?
Neihaera
2009-11-08 . chapter 2
YES! LONG LIVE THE DOCTOR!
JCS1966
2009-11-08 . chapter 2
This. Was. AWESOME! Great job!
acosta perez jose ramiro
2009-11-08 . chapter 2
Hahaha... great one.

Keep the good writing.
spectre666
2009-11-08 . chapter 2
you sir, are not only hilarious, but evil. Well done.
Joe Stoppinghem
2009-11-08 . chapter 2
I do enjoy a fun short story.

Brought back may memories of my youth watching Dr. Who on Iowas Public Television in the 70's and 80's. Good times, good times.


Thanks
bigherb81
2009-11-08 . chapter 2
Nice glad to see that Kim and Shego didn't fall into the chubby sweaty meat paws of the fanboys. I was curious about the prize too. Like I said never watched the show so I still don't really know what the eff it is. But great job on the story thouroughly entertaining.
screaming phoenix
2009-11-08 . chapter 2
The Ronman shoots and scores big time! Why wouldn't you want to be cuddled by both Kim and Shego in bed anyway? Shego must have been terrified to call Ron Lord Ron.

I don't watch Dr. Who so I had to look up the prize Bonnie and Drakken won. Yeah I have to agree with Bonnie, not such a good idea as the new mascot.
noncynic
2009-11-08 . chapter 2
Okay, this came from somewhere warped. Humorously warped! Siccing fanboys on Kim and Shego...however the nervous breakdowns suffered by the Mad Dogs may seriously inhibit their chances of making the play-offs. For the older Rockwaller sisters, I have no sympathy. Good story.
CajunBear73
2009-11-08 . chapter 2
Oh man, this just kept getting worse and worse for certain folks as it rolled along.

That Bonnie is so devious and such the opportunist! Man she could take what she and Drakken put together in their joint custody of the modified 'prize' and take over the world.

And just love how Ron milked the whole sitch of rescuing Kim and Shego from a fate worse than tubby fanboys smothering them. His line to them was heavily borrowed from the Terminator Arc, but the way he modified it works even better..! He gave up being their stuffed teddy bear? I'd never let that one go. Never.

Great wrap-up here, Bon-bon gets what she wants and even more from her agreement with Drew. Ron gets a fantasy come true (hope he gets to live when the bloom is off that rose) and Drew's livin' large as the MHS mascot.

CB73
Sentinel103
2009-11-08 . chapter 2
Ron finally has his props. Peeling the grapes too? WOW.

You know how to beat a Dalek? run down some stairs..

Thanks Charles,


Larry (Sentinel 103)
Mr. Wizard
2009-11-08 . chapter 2
This made a great story even better. The comment about ventilation shafts and Ron's line were winners. Great job.
Classic Cowboy
2009-11-08 . chapter 2
All I can say is YES! That was glorious!
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