Nice to see you write again. I liked your story, though I would also like to see it a little longer at the end. :)
And I did see your improvement!! (At least, that's my impression) Just one small thing, only oversights: two or three times you slipped from presence to past tense. (Like I said, nothing really bad)
Oh, and I so love this episode (Never Again) ;)
Thanks for posting your story and once again: Hope to read more from you soon!

aw. i remeber now :) nice story!

score, mulder gets two cups of coffee! LOL sorry. its great, i know this is bad, but could you jog my memory on which epissode never again is?