You and your bloody cliff hangers!
GAH!
Fabulous as always. On the edge of my seat. You're killing me softly here:P

What did I tell you about the bloody cliffhangers? Eh? Update damnit!!
PLease, this is really good (suspense is killing me, and may just transfer onto you - I'll bury you under a mountain of PMs until you update)
So, hurry?
*evil smirk*
Liris
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I really love your story! It's a perfect combination of action/adventure, and personal stuff too, like Artemis and Holly's relationship. I think it has a great pace, and it's leaving me desperate to find out what happens next. So suspenseful! This is really amazing, I absolutely love it!

hrm, holy water. and how will that bode?

**. -blinks- Well...no, that's basically all there is to say. **. -blinks again- They're screwed. Holly and Artemis and the LEP in Haven. Utterly and completly screwed. -blinks- I think I'm in somewhat of a shock. Not much else to say. This is a great chapter. I can't wait to find out what happens next. Update soon. ^_~

Really good. You got down how the characters would act perfectly. Update please.

You really like the cliffhangers, don't you? Well, if you're gonna do that then I'm gonna demand a fast update. Please? It's really good, and I wanna know what happens!
Liris
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I like it! Is holly ever gonna run outta magic though? Are there to many injuries for her?Update bcause I love it

-puts hands over heart- I love how she still cares so much for him even when she's ** at him. -smiles- Does that mean the thing is finally dead? This is a great chapter. I can't wait to find out what happens next. Update soon. ^_~

Brilliant as always. LOVE the fact that you included the never ending geniuses vs. genii debate.

Aw, that was a cute moment near the end. Cute despite the like, near-death experience right there!

You like the cliffhangers, don't you? This is really good, and if I ask very nocely, will you write more? Please?
Update soon!
Liris
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I'm guessing a graft is like a chimera. Interesting.

Holly is going to end up running out of magic if she keeps having to heal broken bones...

And the Lower Elements seem to be under attack. Yay! Side-plot! Or something like that.

Unbelievable! I love this story! Absolutely, positively, keep writing!

So, that's how it's going to be, is it? One horrible cliff hanger after another, eh?
You fiend!
This is brilliant.