Dude, so frickin' awesome! Please you have GOT to continue with this! I absolutely adore this pairing and I'm so glad that somebody has written a fanfiction about them. I enjoy your writing and once again please, PLEASE continue this!

Dúh,if you keep taking so long on a single update this history will be a really rare forget history,just like the other two CranexTigress fics,they´re gone and this is going on the same way,keep an eye on it!I was expectating that you give some valor to this couple,well,your dont.Do it or not do it,dont let in the middle of...well,barely started,wake up man!

Like I said in the other review, good beginning. Update soon!

Made of awesome. Great job keeping everyone in character and nice detail on the sparring. I also liked the Moneky & Mantiss comments--reminds me on a couple of people *shifty eyes* The only thing that seemed at all out of character to me was the f* uses, which I just couldn't get my head around in ancient China. Of course, KFP is riddled with 21rst century jokes, so maybe the point is moot. I just found it slightly distracting from the flow of the story. But, overall, great job! I'm excited to see where this will go!