I Like, I Lust, I Love!!Please Update Soon!!

loved it!

i love the story! please update!

What a great story! Has so many ways to go! im excited to see what you do with it. Will there be a cat fight between Scarlett and the new girl? (I only said that because Snake-Eyes and Red are getting back together in the next movie!) Or will the new girl not be interested? Or will Snake's not be interested? So many questions... Im sorry but do you mean ripcord? I dont know who that gu your talking about is... the one who said, "What feelings?" Anyways nice chapter! Love your story, if it continues on that way it would be my favorite!

Very good story, and I loved the NEST reference. Will we see more the Transformers in this story?

Well, this looks like a pretty interesting story. I like your OC, Strata/Victoria -- so far, she seems pretty normal and non-Mary Sueish. I look forward to your next chapter. Two pointers: first, I'm wondering if you're planning on making this a Snake Eyes/OC (if you are, I would reccomend rethinking it because the plot line is so overused); second, you missed some capitalizations and stuff, as though you were rushing. Perhaps going slower would help? Anyway, this looks like a pretty cool story, and I'm excited for your update.

~Asterisk*