It's clear that Moiraine and Siuan were pillow friends during the early years, but they both became blues and their highest calling was for causes - not love interests. It takes both of them getting to the point of 'older age' to learn to live a little, and have feelings beyond their desire to save the world. Even then, it is always their driving force in life to get the Dragon Reborn to Tarmon Gaidon.

Your ability to capture their way of talking and interacting, using RJ's tone and words, was great - but, I just don't view their reactions at the end of the story as anything that would be believable for them as characters.

Very tender. Conveyed emotions well and left me wanting more (hint hint!). 10/10!

Aww, sweet! I'll be waiting to see any future stories of yours.