 BenignUser 2009-11-06 . chapter 1I rather enjoyed this. I think one of the highlights for me was the allusion to the Digital World preparing an army of Chosen. You give some nice hints that something VERY big is about to happen relatively soon, and that truly radiates of total epicness!
I can imagine Daisuke running off after having found out Jun was chosen. I somehow get the imagine of him hugging his knees in some far off corner murmuring to himself, "this is not happening, this is not happening" over and over again. lol =o
Though it's kinda too convenient that it's Sora helping her deal with it, no? I think it you could have added more to this story by giving a more detailed account as to how the pair ran into each other and why Sora decided that she should be the one to help Jun deal with her newfound responsibilities.
Still, I think you've presented their interaction in a pleasing light that showed off their friendship really well. It was quite the pleasant read! |