So the little girl and the big scientist had the same problem and only the 10 year-old had the initiative and guts to solve it...hilarious!

You already said they couldn't receive Earth transmissions, how does the Empire block them?

I'm sorry, the beginning was too long. Why are they invading Earth, and how AU is it?

So... no one cares about the massive missile spam?

Feels right, sounds lik e a lot of Characters but as long as I care about what happens to each one it should be very readable

I like Tarkin's voice, it's pleasantly snarky, (especially "Grand Vizier, Tarkin inwardly mused, fancy name for chief toady.") and I love the way you've set the scene on the iHavelon/i, the descriptions of the crew and the ship itself really bring a sense of in-universe reality.

I'm thinking it will take a while for me to read this, but I am so intrigued by the premise! I have also written a long-format story with a lot of POVs and I respect how much work it is to keep all the storylines moving and all the plot threads untangled.

What chappies does the grand scoff attack earth?

Like your story.

Long chapter, lot of dialogue and pretty much no action, but that can be expected. If you don't mind, go check out my Star Wars fanfic, Rise of Darkness.

The Hoenn Murkrow

I've tried, but I can't handle this slow story progression.

Great writing and grammar! Quite rare in these trying times. The problem is, that your prologue keeps on going and going. Chapter after chapter till I ran out of patience and kept glancing every few paragraphs.

Wow. This was edge-of-my-seat fun. You are quite the tale spinner. I can't wait to start part 2. Thank you for sharing your talent. :)

In case you weren't aware of it, your female astonaut's name changes in chapter 59. Unless you have 2 females on the base both with the Martinez surname.

An invasion of Earth from the POV of invaders from the Star Wars universe. It started out slowly, which made me nervous, but I have to admit that for the past 12 chapters or so I have been riveted to the storyline. That said, I think you would be well served by some tighter, more focused editing.

Wow, cool addition, is this the end?