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Cloud Pig
2009-11-21 . chapter 4
OMG I can't believe it you made me cry X_X
You actually made me CRY when Adora died GAH *thrashes* You must write more D8 and QUICKLY ><
Cloud Pig
2009-11-21 . chapter 3
FAVORITE LINE EVAR:

"Morrigan cackled. “Oh, Ceridwen’s far from heartless, despite everything I’ve tried. She takes after you, in that respect. Your weakness has corrupted my offspring.”

“Hurray!”"

And cheesy names For. The. Win.
Cloud Pig
2009-11-21 . chapter 2
And more reviews you shall get.

BLAST and DAMNATION to those who favorite or alert without leaving a review as to WHY -_-

<3 on you. Well written and interesting point of view.

*GUSH* ^^
Cloud Pig
2009-11-21 . chapter 1
OH THIS IS ADORABLE D8!

*FLAIL*

I have nothing else to say other than I am favoriting this and huggling it foreverz!!
Allylynn
2009-11-15 . chapter 4
This story is amazing and so looking forward to reading more keep up the great job that your doing
Allecto00
2009-11-14 . chapter 4
Wow! Another good chapter. Thank You!
Kazic
2009-11-14 . chapter 4
Woo! Looks good so far. I am really enjoying this.

I'm replaying as a dwarf and am having a blast. Still wanting to replay the human noble story and try to get Alistair not to break up with me. any idea?
Ryoko Metallium
2009-11-13 . chapter 3
I haven't had the chance to play this game yet, but after reading this story I'm dying to do so. I've been itching to read stories of this quality! I cannot wait to read more! Please update soon! I'm excited to read more about Alistair's child!
Mithrilquill
2009-11-12 . chapter 3
"Fereldan just hasn’t been the same without your ugly face and heartless ** attitude."

FINALLY! He said it. And we were all thinkin' it ;)...
Mithrilquill
2009-11-12 . chapter 2
Morrigan... hah. As inappropriate as ever.
Mithrilquill
2009-11-12 . chapter 1
And we're all here READING your stories only a week after the game's been out! We're all in the same, obsessed, bewitched-by-Alistair-boat.

Anyway, I wish there was more dialogue between Alistair and his daughter though, but I suppose he is in shock. Lol :b

Eager for this baby to be born!
impsy
2009-11-11 . chapter 3
I am really enjoying this! You've got the characters' personalities down exactly right, and your Adora is a lot like my PC too - forgiving and merciful to the point of being annoying about it, haha, though my PC didn't get on quite so well with Morrigan. And I totally agree, Alistair and PC are totally cheese-tastic, but I love it. :3
Favorite lines so far:
"She wondered if that damn mutt, if Flemeth, if that Orlisian ** Leliana were real people, too."
and
"Your weakness has corrupted my offspring." "Hurray!"
Adorable. Really looking forward to updates! :)
ZachMercurious
2009-11-11 . chapter 3
<3 Alistair and Morrigan going back and forth. Makes the beginning of the game!
rebels_last_stand
2009-11-10 . chapter 3
*is in love with this story*

I love your Allistair-Morrigan interaction, its exactly how I picture them behaving around each other. ^_^
Kazic
2009-11-10 . chapter 2
I finished this game but refused Morrigan's crazy offer. I think I will try it this next play through. Out of curiosity, *can* you get allistair to stay with you after he is declared king? He broke up with me :p

Good stuff, this is on my story alert list.
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