Aw! Poor Merlin! This is kind of cute, in a morbid way. I like little Arthur and little Merlin. :D

This was a really interesting twist , I really enjoyed it.

Parts were sad but I think you showed that Arthur really was hurt by the mistreatment Merlin received.

Poor merlin! he is so naive...

But at least Arthur is not a total prat.

Luna

Aw poor Merlin.

Good story tho.

Update!

Aw, I feel sorry for both Merlin and Arthur. Good story-you should continue this.

Wow. Never would have imagined that. The young and innocent Merlin was so cute! Except for the being beaten part that is. Great job.

That's so sweet. Nice work!