If the Nidoqueen wants to I'll happy take her in. (That is one determined pokemon I want!)

Well that former 'trainer' is now stuck in the midle of the grass with no pokemon :)

Stop flaiming my stories you idiot nobody gives a damn and everybody hates you, I mean i had one spelling error, ONE and i changed it not to mention it said it was yaoi and if you are going to be a homophobe go some where else.

Oh and by the way you made my little sister cancel her profile and stories, she was crying all day, so please stop being a complete bully and if you can't leave, i don't know if you doing this to get people to hate you or if you are just a dumb troll but your stories suck.

Why don't you just delete yourself?

great story.

so sad :(

The poor Nidoqueen! Her trainer was really idiotic as well!

I have to say, nice read. Although, there were a few things that bugged me.

1. In my opinion, the "No! she yells silently" would look nicer if it was it italics, or at least have quotation marks around it.

2. The way you described blastoise's body slam didn't sound at all like a body slam. It sounds more like it jumped on her with it's feet. I re-read it and realized you probably meant for it to land on her with it's body, but it was confusing.

Other than that I have to say, that the story was well written! Keep up the good work!

YoshiGal

AGH! Stupid trainer! It's HIS fault he lost! And nidoqueen was the one who took all the pain! *grumble*. Anywa, Farla, keep up the good work!

You SON OF A BITCH how dare you mistreat that Nidoqueen! Damn you, you stupid, SENSELESS pokemon trainer! GO TO HELL!

God, I'm glad you didn't create pokemon.

The entire pokemon populus would have committed suicide in seconds and anybody who became a trainer would suffer an 80 point drop in IQ.

Is it just me, or are most trainers complete morons?

Whoa... I feel guilty and I'm not the trainer! That poor Nidoqueen deserves better. Way better, with a iron will like that. That Trainer... that... that was ultimate stupidity. If I were Nidoqueen, it'd be a Horn Attack through the head! But if the trainer let her go, maybe she can start a new life in the wild... anything would be better than living under the command of that moron.

sad. But very angsty! I like angsty! You should write a sequel where the nidoqueen killsthe trainer!jk if you want to thats ok too

The Nidoqueen is just left their? Its her trainers fault, the stuped idiot.

your fics convincing enough to make me guilty!talk about good!- ugh, i hate trainers who doesn't care about

pokemon. poor nidoqueen! she's right about her trainer's stupidity!

gr. some trainers are so d* stupid, the j*a**es!

poor thing.