awww the girl gets the guy at the end and got him to declare his love in front of everyone. Awesome! -fist bump-

Loved it! Bella finally stood up for herself and he came running! Too good!

Loved it! What a great one-shot.

I loved that! thank you x

That was glorious! I enjoyed that story so much. Cocky, snarky Edward Cullen and the moused that roared - shy little Bella. That really was a joy to read. I love HS and first love stories so much and this one was definitely right up my alley. Hope you two get together more if this is what we're going to get.

LOL

Thanks for writing this! I'm always looking for great oneshots:)

loved it. edward wasnt really a compled dick, he was being truthful and didnt want to hurt her feelings, but in the end everybody just gets pushed to far and loses it. in the end it turned out good for both of them.

This was great, I loved it! I loved that you kept Edward's feelings toward Bella realistic and he didn't instantly fall in love with her. That was nice.

Great job! :)

Ok wow! Did not notice it was a one shot, was ready for chapter two lol loved it!

SIMPLEMENTE GENIAL!

LOVE!

Loved it, I wanted to slap Edward so hard to begin with but them he came through :D

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Very unique way for these two to come together. I liked how Edward's mental descriptions of Bella changed as his feelings changed.

So glad Edward finally saw the real Bella and that she was able to become more confident in her self. This was really funny and cute and live the sweet ending. :D

Great job girls!