Good story so far and hope you continue soon (as well as Crime and Punishment)

When it was posted i at first stopped reading because it seemed like it was going to be seen through the hornets viewpoint all the way through (plus the fact you spent nearly 10 paraghraps describing the hornet and its life before you introduced a character from the main cast ie the Apron-Wearing Destroyer) which initally put me off but after you posted the second chapter and read the reviews i decided to give it another chance and i'm glad that i did.

anyway i hope you post the next chap soon (cant wait to see what kanako has been getting up to)

I think the placement in time of the story is a bit off - Narus attitude in particular doesn't gel with how she behaved after her own reveal, and canceling out the marriage like that feels kind of forced.
The idea itself works great, though. Maybe a bit of OOC-ness with the swearing.

OK, I just have this to say: Kyle is THE MAN! Or hornet...or whatever.

Love the fic. Keep 'em coming!

Sweet... Take that you btch.

Well, well, soldier...

Hoo-rrah! 1º review, btches!

Now...THIS...was...AW3SOME!

Naru-Bashing at it's FINEST! LOL
And of course, her btching came as NO surprise. And Motoko's a btch, too. What a surprise there. LMAO
I only feel bad 'bout poor li'l Shin-chan. She didn't stand a chance. XD
And I'm really surprised you actually included Ema...who I know nothin' about. ROFL

Kanako WINS!

GAME OVER

SUCKALITY!

ROFLOL Naru got OWN3D! And rightfully so!
And then...oh BOY! The end was MADE of pure WIN! ROFLMAO

Outstanding work, doc! Happy New Year!
Update ASAP! That's an order!

Semper-Fi! Carry on!

LOL! Interesting concept of giving the spotlight to a small but potentially dangerous insect.

For a moment when I read the title, I thought it was reference to a certain naval jet fighter (and one of my favorites too), and that this would be a military/war fic (I guess the words "Flight of the..." reminded me too much of that Vietnam War movie, referecing another naval warplane).

probly naru masturbating to mutsumi and keitaro. i wonder how crappy she feels now.. cuase i hope she does

Well, well, soldier...

You promised, and you TOTALLY delivered!
This...was...AW3SOME!

So. Full. Of. WIN! LOL
Now, you went all out on Kyle's description, eh? "Bold Investigator of Strange Smells"? LMAO THAT was H-I-Larious!
NEVAR would I have come up with that.
And d00d, when the K-Man bit Mutsu-chan's head off...I actually WINCED! ROFL
But they made up. And made OUT afterwards, so 's all good. ROFLOL
And then, the K-Man got OWN3D! ROFLMAO At least he didn't get stung in the freakin' NECK, like I did. Well, I wasn't stung. I was bitten by a fckin' hornet. And it hurt as ALL goddamn HELL!
...
Anyway!

Outstanding work, Doc! I CAN'T freakin' wait for the next chapter.
Update ASAP! That's an order!

Semper-Fi! Carry on!

Great Story

hmm bit confusing at first time but reareading it all came clear and i have to say Great story in short and yea hornet its wierd but intresting and i have been stun by hornets my self in life and its never plesant but it seems for him it was... for moment atleast >.>
sorry no long review since i got to run to shop then to bus to make it back to dorm cya around