dude, you seriously just blew me away. 8D

Oh my god, such a sweet poem!

Perfect. I just watched the movie today, and this fits it perfectly.

(I mean, who else had the feeling, 'by the time you reach him, you'll be REALLY OLD!')

Yeah. I really hoped he could have taken her with him or something... But this poem is perfect.

(And I don't normally read poems! But yours just seems SO RIGHT)

The poem is interesting, and it is well written. I also think that writing poems can be difficult.