fantastic... Edward is so damn 'dorky' its sweet : )

Your Edward is so perfectly written. I seriously adore him.
And Alice? She is perfect. The perfect little mix of crazy and awesome ;)

Aww Edward is truly affected by Bella, he's damn near speechless. Looking forward to some more Bella and Edward interaction.

Just found your story ladies. It was Hot! Looking forward to the next chapters.

Hi!I think that they can be Bella and Edward.Nice story btw.

I love how you edited out the insane amount of cuss words. It read perfectly without them...I didn't miss them for one moment!

You are amazing, Ms. SaraiR88!! Simply amazing.