|Reviews for Because You're Mine|
| MalloryKnoxx 12/28/12 . chapter 1
This was really good...I was thinking, who the hell is "dear brother"?
| fanfictionalcolic 8/11/12 . chapter 1
| Molly Dooker 3/27/12 . chapter 1
I had my suspicions about Alice, except I'd theorised that she was actually a "he"; drawn from the story's details "find dear brother" and "sweater perfectly formed to her straight form" -I thought she was cross-dressing from the beginning. My bad.
Fantastically written, I had no problem becoming riveted from the very beginning. Interesting and unusual plot too -I'm adding this to my favorites because I know I'll want to read it again.
| crudeladevil 3/21/12 . chapter 1
Sick and beautiful...or beautiful and sick, I still dont know which order.
A twisted HEA (she died, didnt she), dark story narated in masterful way.
Although I prefere my favourite characters alive and happy, I couldnt deny the beauty of your little story. Even if the hear of my nape was pricked throughout all of it.
My compliments to the author.
| Snappher 3/16/12 . chapter 1
sonofabitch! I did NOT see that coming! :)
You totally hoodwinked me! That was some creepy business there. POOR Edward! :( WTF with Alice? holy schnikeys!
I was thinking that Edward and Alice were some sort of freaky incestuous lovers or something, not that Alice was psycho...and poor Jasper, buried under the bushes with his shears..and probably no peen. :(
You are a tricky one, and I loved your Goth tale of Culleny goodness :)
| rubell 3/8/12 . chapter 1
WHOA! you tripped my head out! i never would have thought...
| chemaly 11/22/11 . chapter 1
Wow! This was AMAZING! :D Really horror, but what a surprise at the end.
Its very well written, and the mystery is really good! Nothing negative to say about it! I enyoed very much, thank you!
So, my english socks, but i wanted to say you, how much i loved this little story :3
| MoonyandProngs 11/2/11 . chapter 1
Wow! The way this story was written had me on the edge of my seat. Very scary and suspenseful! When Bella was reading Edward’s journal and everything was coming together, I kept thinking, “Not Edward, please not Edward!” I loved reading it!
| A green eyed girl 10/12/11 . chapter 1
I didnt expect that ending
that was an awesome ride. )
| KangaStew 9/18/11 . chapter 1
hi, it's Jenna McVampy from facebook.
For The Summer is my all time favourite ff... read it way too many times to count!
just read this ff and WOW. soooo amazingly cool! really love your writing XXX
| MissTeenageDream 8/21/11 . chapter 1
This story was so freaking amazing and tripped me out! Whoa!
| fcat5761 8/11/11 . chapter 1
that was twisted but I really enjoyed it! I first thought they were both evil but so bittersweet to read he truly loved only her! Great read!
| venure 8/10/11 . chapter 1
great dark story! I liked the twist!
| futurecullen26 7/30/11 . chapter 1
woah... just... woah... that was amazing! what the heck?
| graphomaniac 7/12/11 . chapter 1
Wonderfully creeptastic! Poor Edward. (Although I will say that the description of how she climbed into Bellas window gave it away for me...her movements lithe, just as the climbing of the tree in the begining.) I will never be able to look at sweet (yet creepy) Twilight Alice the same! Also, I absolutely love Four Summers. It is the only ff I have ever gone back to reread. It is beautiful. I desperately want a pretty bound copy, (hint, hint).