this was interesting but why did you call Rose idiotic?

don't you DARE not going on!
I like your way of writing, this was very good :)

i loved this! i really think you should continue!

yes continue, its brilliant. would possibly rethink the title? the story is so much better written than the general sypnosis would have you think =]

This is a really great premise. I would love to see this continued!

Such a good opening! I love it! Write more, please!