you know why I like this story? (well, one reason anyways)

It gives this great, obscure, plausble explanation for why Johnny hates humans and being touched by humans. I love it! And whoa, in that vein of thought, what if he liked Devi so much because on some deep level, she reminded him of Gaz? That would explain why he gave her a chance, out of all the other people in the city.

Crazy thoughts, yah.

But I love the Vasquez Effect, and it makes me all warm and fuzzy inside to see another fanfic (particularly since TM UFO is all dead now)

The theory about Johnny actually being Dib is one of the ones I'm most interested in. I like your story, it's very interesting.

I agree that the theory really makes sense.

Keep writing, please!

Yuki

That's a pretty cool concept; you wrote it well :)