i forgot how the song went so i was listening to it while reading the story. I started crying. the build up of Hiei's emotions was done very tastefully i thought. i didn't think he was out of character at all. A very well done one-shot.

Well that was emotional.

Aww, that was really touching! I liked it. ^_^ Keep up the good work!

That was so beautiful! I CRIED! NO JOKE! I REALLY DID!

we know why Hiei left before he started crying add more to it what happen afterward thanks

-blubber- Sad! I do appreciate that he didn't cry in front of everyone. There were a few typos and grammatical errors, but nothing major. Liked it. ^_^