I hope to see the next chapter soon I'm curious to see how the infatuation starts between them.

This sounds like a cool story. Please continue.

I like the story so far and I think it is well writen

WOW!

I liked the prologue, it really drew me in!

And this chapter was good!

I was really impressed at how you described Kiba, and that's not a flame at your writing style, oh hell no! It's the contrast from the anime/manga to this AU story!

I hope you get to update soon, but of course, since your laptop imploded (mimes a big bang, cause she's "cool" like that) I understand that you can't updte sooner!

Wolfie-chan .

Heavy. ._. Heck her tone in this chapter seemed so bleakish I'm expecting dreary rain and cold winds. I'm starting to feel the weight of the world myself!

Great job 8D

You have done it again! I've read one chapter and you have already written my favorite Kiba, favorite set up and im hooked! I cant wait to read more! ah Kiba is so sexy! i wish i could hire him!

but who is the killer?

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This is looking good so far. I'm really sorry about your computer! That's rough. Hopefully you didn't have anything irreplaceable on it? (Maybe an impossible hope, but...)

I love this! very intriging! cant wait for more

Brilliant :)

I already love this story!

I can't wait to see where it goes XD

Please write more!

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i kinda can guess that Hinata can't die in the first chapter is she's a main character but i still need to know what happens!

RUN HINATA!

Wow, very interesting so far, it's a very promising prologue.

I like Naruto stories that have to do with mafia, so I'm definitely going to read this :D

Mmhmm I like it :)

Please write more I'm so curious :)

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OMG! THANK YOU SO MUCH!

I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU GUYS!

That was SUCH a tease! but i loved it! i cant thank you guys enough! this is going to be my new life line for when im feeling down, life's been rough lately and it feels like the only break i get from it is reading manga and your stories. Thank you (gosh cant stop saying that!)

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this looks to be an awesome start, can't wait to see more )