 ThunderRiver411 2009-11-20 . chapter 1This is looking good so far. Hope you continue to write more stories. I'm in the middle of working on something myself, but its not up yet, but it is going to be interesting...I hope.
Continue soon and I hope you read mine when its up. |
 Invader Johnny 2009-11-08 . chapter 1Heh... I dunno why but I liked Tucker's POV on "DCMH" better than Sam or Danny's POV.. it just seems... better... I cant seem to explain why I think that.
Invader Johnny Signing Off. |
 Jae B 2009-11-08 . chapter 1You have a knack for writing Tuck's pov. I think you should do this more often, simply because it's refreshing to read his character's sense of humor. Once again, I felt the intro opened rather quickly, but since Tuck was absent from the entire scenario, it's understandable.
The theory around Gregor's character is definitely plausible. I readily agree it's a good underlying reason why he might have chosen to date Sam.
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this DCMH segment, especially from Tuck's pov. Like I said, you should include his objectives more often. Keep on writing.
-Jae- |
 Amethyst Ocean 2009-11-08 . chapter 1AH, I love this! I read the Danny and Sam's versions as well! This is BRILLIANT.
I think you should write another "Turning the Tables" chapter in Gregor (or Elliot's) version. If you want. I think it'd be interesting to see that.
And you brought up a good point--a point I was even thinking about that had never really been offered any closure.
How DID Gregor know how to find Sam? It was obvious he went through GREAT pains and care to make sure he'd get into her good graces. I wonder why. It could have been that she was rich; I thought along those lines too.
But I agree; there's no question that he actually did develop a crush on her, whether he had had no intention of liking her or not, he did.
Ah, but as a jerky as he was, I'm glad he stepped in. It was the right shove that Danny needed to realize that Sam wasn't going to be available forever. |
 Super-Berry 2009-11-08 . chapter 1I don't know what I should be feeling right now? The whole Gregor idea knowing Sam was rich or is "Gregor" rich? I'm confused on that part. Other than that Tucker's pov clears up some stuff on our whole debate we had. Still wish, Sam had more admirers secretly or openly would've been nice. Anyways love the comment Tucker says "Yeah, she's kind of a hottie... ," would be something he would say. It was a nice read after a long day at work. |
 Black January 2009-11-08 . chapter 1I love reading Tucker's POVs. Great story, as usual! Hope to see more soon! |
 Dreaming-Of-A-Nightmare 2009-11-08 . chapter 1this is made of pure awesomesauce. X3 |
 DannySamLover20 2009-11-08 . chapter 1this was good! good job! keep his and hers going 2! |
 wigonas 2009-11-08 . chapter 1Another great fic making me want to dance! Thank you so much!
I really didn't think Gregor had had another ultimate motive(That's too cruel to Sam! Not that it wasn't cruel when he had been lying all the time.) but I can guess there were possibility of that.
Your way to describe Tucker's thought is always amazing.(I can't forget the one in the Tales from the Phantom Plavet. It is still my favorite!) |
 Nylah 2009-11-08 . chapter 1Hi, loved this (and the other two; I did read them but was too lazy to review, sorry). I've heard this take on Tucker's motives before somewhere. You did a wonderful job merging this fic with the episode (as usual :).
I did think the Gregor having even darker motives idea is great (it explains a lot), but would he have given up so easily then? Maybe it wasn't his idea, but somebody put him up to it?
Thanks for writing
Nylah |
 anonymous 2009-11-07 . chapter 1 That is an excellent point about Elliot's trickery. Is this foreshadowing for a plot point in the longer DP story you're writing? |
 Completely Different 2009-11-07 . chapter 1Gregor/Elliot being into Sam for the money makes so much more sense. I always thought it seemed a bit weird, otherwise. |