Name: Vean Redding (confusing name, so yes, he's male)

Age: 20

Appearance: Blue eyes, light brown hair with natural golden blonde parts. Wears black hoodies with neon t-shirts under them and black pants.

Personality: Nice but rude sense of humor

Other: He drinks every other day

I like it so far. I can't wait for more :)

Here's my OC if you need anymore:

Name: Angela Margaret Carnahan

Age: 18.

Appearance: About 5'3" -though she usually wears heels making her 5'7"- and slim weighing about 100 lbs. She's very pale with large light blue eyes that are usually the first thing people notice about her. Her hair's golden blonde and very wavy near curly with a white streak in her bangs which fall into her right eye, she occasionally clips her bangs back with a large black bow. Her ears are pierced twice along with her septum and lower lip, and she has her initials tattooed on the back of her neck.

Relationship with Family: Only child. After graduating from high school and moving to college she cut off all contact with her parents though they never had any problems, she simply wanted to lead her own life.

Make-up: Bright red lipstick with black and silver eyeshadow and black eyeliner and mascara.

Clothes: A brightly coloured mini dress, usually either bright blue or purple, with black tights, black heels, a black military style jacket and a sequined beret in the same colour as her dress.

Personality: She's shy when first meeting people giving them the impression that she's unfriendly but she's anything but. She's generally a happy person and is very smart and would much rather spend her time studying as opposed to partying. Although she tends not to say too much she has a lot of self confidence and doesn't care what anyone thinks of her, she's also very flirty and will unintentionally flirt with just about anyone which usually leads to trouble. She's very sarcastic, and is always seen in the latest fashions.

Friends: Girls; Wendy and Bebe. Boys; Craig, Cartman and Stan. Any other OC's.

Enemies: Pip. Butters. Jimmy. The Goth kids.

Crush: Cartman.

Likes: Eighties music, especially Bon Jovi and Motley Crue. Shopping, she can't go a single day without visiting the mall. Going to the gym. Playing guitar and flute. Sports.

Dislikes: She's terrified of rats, insects and large fish. People being hyper annoys her to no end. People wearing Crocs.

Other: She moved to South Park from Scotland when she was 13 because her dad, an officer in the army was stationed in Colorado. She speaks with a very strong accent that often makes her difficult to understand, especially when she's angry. She's completely incapable of cooking, even working a toaster is beyond her. She can communicate in sign language.

Oh yay, a college OC story~~
Here's my OC if you want her~
Name: Madison F. Jones
(The F stands for ...uh, ** x])
Gender: Female

Looks: Messy shoulder lenght blonde hair, bright green eyes, light tan skin. Tall&thin.

Personality//Interests: Cherful, energetic, and arrogant, sometimes aggressive & manipulative. Loud. She often gets bored, and feeling the need to do something dramatic, often looks for trouble. Somewhat of a Narcissist, often calls herself "awesome". She knows a lot of curses, and often uses 'em. Seems distracted all the time. Loves laughing, even in serious situations. Can stick up for herself, and enjoys fighting with others. In dramatic situations, she does the sound effects, (dundundun~!) Careless with what she says, and does things without thinking about the consequences. Irresponsible.

Relationship with family; She's the black sheep of a rich catholic family, because an atheist, and she causes "problems" for them.

What they wear: ripped skinny jeans with scribbles in sharpie that has her 'to do' lists. A t-shirt with the slogan "i throw peanuts at old ladies." converse with the british flag on it.

likes; fighting, causing trouble, drama, sports, Dr. Pepper, junk food~

dislikes; losing, ghosts, ghost stories.

talents; Madison's a good actor, can turn from sickeningly sweet one minute to the devil's daughter the next.

crush; Stan, Kyle or Christophe~
(pft, or all three~~ c;)

Other;
She likes the antisocial quiet people, and will try to make friends with them.
She has a habit of clinging to people's arms while talking to them.
Her life dream is to be friends with a couple of people and go around causing trouble for everyone.
Her catchphrase is; "** Yeah!"

I like this chapter, hopefully in the next one things will start to unfold, btw my username is StePHaniee.t, update soon :) also what do you think of the last name McAuley ?

Yay, Rhiannon was in here :D
I really loved this chapter, and I'm now dying to figure out what everyone's dark secrets are, like Lucky with her boyfriend XD

okay this is an awesome idea!
idk if you are still taking OC's but here are mine...


Name-Marisa Daria Sossani

Age-18

Appearance- Blackish brown wavy hair w/ lots of layers and razered side bangs, golden eyes , thick eyelashes, short(5'2), thin, tan/ olive toned skin(exotic beauty)

clothes- Clothing- her clothing would consist of all designer labels and outfits that look as if they belong in vogue. ex..

lazy- olive green cashmere tee shirt under a long grey wool cardigan, open, over medium wash denim leggings. dark brown beret, striped (olive, pale blue, dark brown) scraf, and high heeled brown booties
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regular- Cashmere tank (Pea greenish)tucked into a tiered cream mini skirt with light grey tights underneath going into dark brown studded leather ankle boots. dark brown leather jacket, open, for warmth. acsesorized with a matching colored green silk headband and long cream necklace.


Personality-She's a good girl thats trying to go bad. Altough she is bubbly, gulible, perky, girly and sorta clueless( in school terms tho she is genius, this is just 'street smarts') she never says no to trying anything be thrownig rocks at the scary lookin' dude or going sky diving. she is not to strong and isnt very good w/ pain but is increadibly fast due to her petite build.She dosnt have a good sense of judgement and is very gulable. she is a bit of a gossip and dosnt really have a filter of what she says(would walk up to anyone and tell them "you look constipated" because she thinks its the nice thing to do). Very stuborn, driven, and flirty. has temper tantrums like a five year old which are usually caused by stress, not getting what she wants, and her brother. she can be outgoing but tends to space out if bored

friends- bebe(bff) other girls, some of her bros friends, oc's you think she would hang w/

enimies- cartman(who she calls eric or jelly roll), kyle(thinks she is a bit of an air head), lots of random people she is mean to

Relationship with Family- loves her family and is close w/ her mom but her parents are always busy so they spoil her and her brother

Crush- token

siblings- Twin bro Vito

extra- is incredibly rich and has an italian accent. loves to throw parties. is a dancer and cheerleader, is terrible at all sports other than dance, cheer, gymnastics, and ice skating. she hates being made fun of for being short. hates getting called stupid/ blond/ slow. her parents got her one of the best rooms for her to share with her brother. drives a yellow porshe. is deathly afraid of brids. screams very easily and at times most wouldnt. is a shopoholic and is studying to become a stylist to the stars like her idol rachel zoe.


Name- Vito Amir Sossani

Age- is Marisa's younger by five minutes faternal twin

personality-a little bit of a jerk, is cocky and always has a smartass comment for everything, has no shame, and is increadibly stupid in book terms, very tough guy in action and is athletic. Bad boyish and quite the little player. full of himself and showoffish. has a sweet side as he will do anything for family and loved ones. sad thing is he is the responsible one

appearance- medium/short length wavy blackish hair, olive/ light green eyes, tan/olive skin, musclar w/ broad sholders, 5'11

clothing- unbuttoned desighner button down over a tee shirt with dark designer jeans

sibling- marisa

crush- many different girls at a time but you can pick his main person or person he falls for

familly relationship- very close to his dad and very loyal

friends- Clyde, Stan, Token(bff), Kenny, other jocks

enimies-Kyle(nerdy-ness), Butters, losers

extra- has a red lamborgini, loves to ** off his sister, can not think of more than one thing at a time( like a dog;]), is amazing at every sport invented but especially soccer, is being drafted by a few pro soccer teams

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Wow, I never woulda though Lucy as the neat-freak type! :P and I laughed so hard at Kenny trying to be charming! Oh and with my OC review I forgot to put down Vivi's family, sorry!

She has a mother- Cecile Sykes (Painter), father Oliver Sykes(Engineering Manager) and lastly her younger brother: Theodore 'Theo' Sykes, has electric blue eyes and chocolate coloured hair. Is in the same grade as Ike Broflovski and is his best friend. She gets along quite well with her family, but hates how overprotective her dad is around any male that comes near her (friends included).

Well this is quite a good idea, I don't think there is any SP college ones out there! Well here's Vivi for ya!

Name: Vivienne 'Vivi' Sykes

Age: same as everyone else

Gender:female

What they look like: Red-Violet coloured shoulder length hair with bangs, usually worn in two low pigtails so it spikes out, Green-Blue eyes with flecks of silver, has fair coloured skin, and is 5'5.

What they wear: She wears a striped shirt(wears a different colour everyday, and has every colour shirt imaginable). bandana tied around neck(same colour as shirt), black jeans/cargo pants, skate shoes(also same colour as shirt), her jewellery is always silver.

Likes: playing violin, fixing cars and other things, lollypops, acting like a kid, sleeping in, manga, anime, music, day dreaming, explosions and making said explosions (she's a bit of a pyromaniac) :P

Dislikes: wannabes, sl*ts, mean people/ bullies, when her ipod runs out of batteries, hates corriander(the herb), acting mature and sports, storms and snakes(is terrified of them!)

Crush: Tweek Tweak, she thinks his jittery-ness is adorable!

Friends: Christophe/The Mole(her best friend), Tweek, Craig, Clyde, Kenny, other OC's, Butters, Damien, Pip.

Enemies: Cartman, Wendy, Kyle(she doesn't hate him, but mostly sees him as a rival!)

Talents: can play Violin, speak fluent French, is a pretty good mechanic and loves to fix cars and other stuff! has a Black Belt in Karate(her parents idea)

Personality: she's usually hyperactive, fun-loving, funny, and totally random. She's also extremely loyal to her friends and will protect them even if it puts her in danger. Is prone to saying random perverted things and jokes, much to Kenny's amusement. Doesn't take crap from anybody and isn't scared of getting into fights even if she knows she doesn't stand a chance (she has pride issues) Can be calmed down if given lollypops.

History: Was born in France, but moved to South Park when she was 8 with her family, she speaks with a slight French accent, which Cartman constantly makes fun of.

Wow, you did update fast lol. I like the story so far, poor Lucky :( I like the idea that everyone has something dark happen to them, seems fair and makes the story more interesting :D. Can't wait to see what happens next ^_^

Wowzers, fast update! Skillz, dude. Knowing Jess, I have a feeling the quest of getting Lucky and her ex back together will be 100 percent insane. Suh-weet job of introducing everyone, by the by. Awesome. 8D

Ooh, quick update! Nice! Aaw, poor Lucky. I can't wait to read what Jess has in store XD

Great story so far! Hope u use my oc! XP
Name: Mary Christmas (a name she hates)
Style: her favorite colors r navy blu and blac, she never wears red, and her style is stylish/trendy.
siblings: Holly and jolly, girl and boy, twins, Ike's age.
Makeup: Mascara, eyeliner, sometimmes navy blue eyeshadow, ice cream flavored lip-gloss.
Hobbies: Singing, dancing, listening to music(she likes pop, hip-hop, some country) and reading(she likes old classics)
personality: nice, kind of shy, worries alot.
friends: Kyle, the rest of that gang
enemies: Cartman
crushes: Kyle
Instrument: Flute
other things: she always wears a navy blue scarf, moved from Britain and has a British accent (which she also hates)

This is pretty cool, college atmosphere huh? I’ve seen you around fanfic, your character and mine have been in the same story, they don’t seem to get along though lol. Well the one for South Park is just a bit different from TDI(mostly the history and amount of times she‘s been to Juvie), but here’s Chelsea!


Name: Chelsea Marie Richey(Rye-key)

Age: One year older than Jess, was held back in 1st grade

Appearance: Dark brown choppy layered hair, left side bangs dyed red the tips yellow. Dark brown almost black eyes. Tan skin, height 5’ 9”,athletic build, girl abs. Has flame wrist tattoos, spiderbite piercing(blood red hoops), bellybutton piercing, and an eyebrow piercing(both have a flame design).

Clothes: Tight fit black hoodie with the words “Plays with Fire” on the back, unzipped. Graphic tank tops/tees, or with funny quotes, never wears any tops solid colored. Skinny jeans. White DC‘s with drawings all over it.

Personality: Chelsea is a huge pyromaniac. She is laid-back, outgoing, childish and perverted. She is a nice person till’ you get on her bad side. She is a daredevil, does crazy stunts, has broken almost every bone in her body because of this. Very competitive and absolutely hates losing. She is rebellious, always got detentions in middle/high school, has been to Juvie. Loves to draw and paint, she’s an art major.

History: Her mom was murdered when she was 10, and her Dad is always on business trips. Moved to South Park in 7th from Newark, New Jersey, after spending a year in Juvie for burning down her middle school. Went to Juvie again in 8th for tagging various stores and was caught trying to burn an abandoned log cabin. Her troublemaking has toned down a BIT since she went into college.

Likes: fire, explosions, art, music, parties, pranks, dancing(hip-hop, break-dance),winning, tagging

Dislikes: Homophobes, country music, modern Disney, girly things, losing, cops, Juvie, being caught,

Talents: Drawing, photography, guitar & cello, running away from cops, dancing(hip-hop, break-dance),

Family: Dad, Michael(Engineer), Big Brother Keenan (21,major in Culinary Arts,he just like a guy version of Chelsea, just without the piercings,they are sometimes mistaken for twins.)

Friends: Wendy and Bebe, they were the first friends she made when she moved. Kenny, Craig, Stan, Christophe, Damien, Trent Boyett(she met him in Juvie) and other OC’s

Enemies: Cartman, Kyle, anybody who messes with her or her friends,

Crush: Christophe, or Bebe (she’s bisexual). You can pair her up with anybody really though, PM if you want her with someone else.

Other:
-Favorite band is, A Day To Remember
-Works at an art store(gets discounts)
-Can solve a rubiks cube
-Can dislocate arms and can do head spin for an insanely long time
-Stress smoker

Nice beginning with two radically different characters but something tells me that you're not in college. Well, college is completely different as they don't give you schedules of your classes; you pick them out weeks before they take place so literally every student's schedule is different. Next, the apartment you're most likely referring to are dorms which typically don't have five people sharing a room unless it's a suite and only then the most that I know that share one of those is four. The stereotypical dorm, though, is small and as two people literally sharing one room. That room comes with two beds, a platfrom that serves as a desk with two chairs and either the dorm complex itself has private bathrooms or community bathrooms where everyone uses the same one.

Now before you get to professors, here's the big thing about them: they don't care about the students. By that I mean they aren't going to be like a high school teacher and do one on one with you or hold your hand like a little kid. They usually teach a classroom of two to three hundred students at a time depending on the subject and how big the college is. You have to go to the professor yourself if you want help and even then they will just answer the questions you ask straight up without elaboration unless you specify that you want it. When it comes to tardiness, that depends on the professor: either they ignore you or they kick you out of the room. They have tenure so they don't care if you hate their guts.

There's a billion other things about college that are different from high school, so many things that I won't be able to put them all in just a review or PM so if you need more, just contact me and be specific about what you want to know. College is a whole other world and most people treat it as if it's like high school. College ain't high school, I'll tell you right up here and now.

Now for an OC:

Name: Bain Cynis

Age: 19

Appearance: Male, flat brown hair, heterochromic eyes (right eye brown, left eye green), short, skinny

Clothes: black trench coat, blue jeans, upper body can be whatever you want it to be

Personality: quiet, smart, sociopathic, sophisticated, cryptic

Crush: None

Friends: None, hates everybody

Family: mother and father, not really important or anything

Likes: reading, plotting, listening to classical music

Dislikes: people, social interations, physical activity

Other: has sociopathic tendencies but doesn't apply himself...yet; is a bit of a sexist; when he talks, is short yet cryptic; tends to be invisible to others so can blend into the background quite well

i think its a good start but maybe make the next chapters longer, also for characters can u plz plz plz make stan one of the main ones i'll be so fricken happy lol..and if u need a new oc

Name: Mila (cant reli think of a good last name so thats up to you)
Age: same as the rest of the girls

Looks: short for her age, very slim but not anorexic, medium dark brown hair with long bangs and light blonde highlights. hates makeup. Has, 5 piercings on her left ear and 6 on her right, an eyebrow, a nose, and wants one on her lip. Has a tattoo of a chinese symbol that means piece on her neck.

Clothes: Regular scene kid kinda outfits, loves converse (owns a million pairs) dc high tops, usually wears skinny jeans, cute tops with very little accesories, plaid baggy shirts, dc, tna, bench, abercrombie, hoodies. loves different hats, arm warmers, leg warmers and funky things like that.

Personality: Outgoing,very fun, but shes a bit sad inside and sometimes you can tell, from canada (ontario), loves green day, skatebaording, trampolining, and kind of a bad girl. been suspended 5 times. loves her friends, her music (plays some guitar.

Family: parents divorced, used to live with her dad and her step mom. now shes old enough to loive with her formely abusive mom.

Past: Mom used to abuse her (has mental issues). Older sister went to live with mom a few years ago(step mom and sister used to kill eachother). Used to go to counseling after her dad kicked her mom out. Just moved to south park with her mom and sister.

Crush: Stan

Friends: Doesnt have a lot of friends so far but her and red (rebecca) are starting to get pretty close.

Enemies:

Pets: 2 cats named smidge and sneakers.

Sayings: 'sweet', 'sick', 'dude', 'yo', 'revolting'

I would be so happy if you used her or maybe if you dont like some of my ideas you can change them around but thankss.