Great chapter. I can't wait to see how this turns out.

Hey there,

This is a GREAT chapter. I think you're sight seeing the next to last episode of this season though, from what little I've gained John ends up in a cell in the shu with Helen at some point (Haunted is the name) but this is a GREAT story. :-) A wonderful early holiday gift for sure, nice work.

Melissa

You're my third english autor... I've not understood all, but the main idea yes. I like really you idea of John wanted to make Helen happy. It's original and like I expected first, Helen don't agree with the idea of a clone.
Have a good day or evening

Great story. I can't wait to read the rest.

I'm glad you're continuing the emotional state of Helen after Ashley's death. The one true gift for Helen would be to begin a new life with John, and possibly another child. If it could be done, certainly Helen would be the one to accomplish such a feat to change John back into what he was originally to her and her love. :D I sadly miss Ashley from the series, but you have come up with a wonderful solution.

I've never really been able to see Helen with John. Unfortunately, I still associate Helen with Sam and thus with Jack. But in your hands, the relationship is believeable. It's even tender and certainly poignant. Do continue posting. Thank you for writing.

Hey there,

WOW what a cliffhanger, will he go back or not? Of course Helen reached and was able to influence the real John, she always could but then again he could influence her as well. :-D

WONDERFUL work, more, more, more soon.

Melissa

I quite enjoy this story line. Though I must admit to it being the first story I have read with this pairing. Ilook forward to more.

Aw, that was sweet. In a dark, twisted kind of way, I guess. They must have really been in love (like Sam/Jack kind of love) to still care so much after more than 100 years! Hope they do cure him, though I'm sure there will be some twists, turns, and bizarre adventures along the way.

I can hear Helen's voice in the story. Kudos for nailing Helen beautifully. I have always been fond of Nikola and I like yours very much. I find the story most intriguing so far and I look forward to more.

This is an interesting concept. Looking forward to reading mroe in the next chapter.

Hm, intriguing! I'm glad she shut down the clone thing immediately. John would probably be boring without the "bad boy" thing going on. Plus, it just isn't right.

Hopefully Tesla can cure him...

Aw... shucks! I love Helen/John love stories! I'm glad you updated. It was good Nikola warned Helen.. it would be prudent to nip this thing in the bud, announce her undying love for John Druitt, and the two of them share a passionate, fiery kiss... Sorry.
Anyway, good story!

Loved it - can't wait for more!

Hey there,

I am reading I assure you and wow you threw me with the clone of John Druitt, I thought he wanted her clone Ashley there at the end of the first chatper. LOVE this, you're doing a wonderful job. Keep it up and I love Will's move to defend his mentor and such.

Melissa