... You know, I just remembered that a lot of Aesop's Fables were DEPRESSING.

Poor, poor Danny. He could have seen it coming from a mile away and he still would have helped. It's in his nature.

Wow. I've never even heard this fable before! But you did a good job with it. Thanks for writing.

Not bad. Somewhat depressing, but well written.
*alerts*

Ah! Brilliant! If not in idea, then most certainly in execution. The parallels you drew were genius, and it was quite heartbreaking for Danny. :( And it helps me see the fable in a new light as well--before (in my perception) the bat was a wishy-washy character who was punished for his lack of loyalty. But he can't change what he is any more than Danny can.

Great job and thank you for writing.

Oh, wow, that was happy.
Want some pancakes?
No? Oh well. But I do like your creativity. Interesting. Wonder what the next one's gonna be about. =D
I like bats. They should've used a flying squirrel or something in that fable instead.
Ooh, the next one's gonna be the tortoise and the hare, am I right? No? Oh. Well. Hmm...uh, the crow and the pitcher?
Well, this is a long review. But I like your idea. I'll look forward to more of this.
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Now that I reread it, this really isn't a long review. So. But I won't waste any more of your time with rambling about waffles. Again, I like your idea. Very unique.
Are you sure you don't want pancakes?

That is way too sad. D:>