cute!

interesting, thought unlikely.

Interesting story, and I like your perspective on Charlie! I never read a fic about him that went so into depth! It kinda reminds me of Eragon. Excellent job, wonderful writing style, and nice plot.

Oh, lovely. Great idea and great writing. I think I shall have to read it more carefully later (bit of a rush right now), but I absolutely love how you portrayed Dragons, and Charlie. Favs!

This was a great fic! Please tell me youplan on writing more like it in the future? Please? I love the thought of Charie talking to write more like this soon!

cool...like charlie a lot more now...

I LIKE THIS FIC A LOT!

GREAT FIC!

This is awesome! *slap on the back*

Bestest, you still astound me. This is such a wonderful idea! I always did like Charlie and it's neat to see someone taking an interest in developing his character. Very well done. I can't wait to read more of what you've written while I've been gone.

That was awesome! Seriously, I see big possibilities for a Charlie-centric fic that involves the dragons and other stuff! Or it can just be a fantastic little vignette but think about it... Anyway I thought that you characterized Charlie very well, character portrayal is something that you seem to be very good at and this was a lot of fun. A great fic, I'm very glad that you wrote it.

Lovely story you have here. You do tend more toward vignettes and mood

pieces, which make a nice change of pace from the 30 chapter epics out

there. If Charlie shares any more info on the dragons, do write more. I'm

a firm believer that Charlie is underused as a writing muse. Keep up the

good work!

HIDOI! ::sniffsniff:: You never told me that this was your other account! And here I was trying to find what you had written lately, because I noticed for some odd reason you hadn't updated the "Rachel Lynn" account...so when I was looking for "For a Girl" to show to a group of friends, I finally figured out it was you! Hidoi desu yo!

Err, now that I'm done ranting, exactly what else can I saw besides the fact that it was wonderful, as all of your stuff is? I mean, I just loved the overall mood to this, a sort of conversation that drags you in and adds much needed characterization. The setting is also *perfect*; I got the most amazing visuals just reading your prose...

So, yeah, you did terrific! But, honestly now, are you really surprised?