Nicely done. The story feels and flows like Vash; something that is quite hard to get in a story. I liked the part about poisonious butterflies though it does not seem to completely mesh with the other theme.

This is very good, and exactly how I feel about Trigun as well. It's real philisophical, and I like that.

Hmmmmmmmm. Something more to think about as I try to sort out what I think about Trigun. Good fic.

VERY good reflection fic. I especially like the part at the end where Vash goes "Some butterflies are poisonous." How true.

poisonous butterflies scare me.

Kinda makes you want to go "hmmm." Short and sweet but a little unfocused - there's no real theme running through here. Still, it feels very in-character and the last line hit the nail dead on.

Hmm... I liked it! Very deep and touching...